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Please finish this story.  You've got me hooked.

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I'm so glad you found the story and are enjoying it. I promise I will finish the story, no matter how long it takes! So, please keep looking for updates. I'm almost done with the next chapter. Thanks for your patience and a nice review.

This is fantastic!  Ive just read the entire story so far and it is incredible.  I love the way that all the characters are so mentally troubled after the battle.  I have always expected to read about a perfect world perhaps full with rounding up the last death eaters or something, completely overlooking ideas of mental breakdowns.  I can't wait for you to write more (i urge you to do so please) but really well done  i love it :D

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Thank you! This is how I really think things could have gone after the final book, so I'm glad you like it. I will try to have more out by the beginning of this week. 
Thanks for reviewing!

More please! Am waiting with baited breath for the story to continue.

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Thanks! I am trying to get the next one done by the end of this weekend. I've been so busy with work and kids, the entire summer has been a blur!
Thanks for your review!

As I've just founded this site, I won't review all of our chapters one by one. Just one review to the end (what it is currently). (And sorry about my bad English, as it is'nt my first language. Can read and understand it very well, but writing it down is the thing were things goes bad).

As a quite big fan of the HP books and the storyline Rowling has created, I don't like to read other stories than those which stays in that way what Rowling has guided. During this few days I've read stories here and I've found only 3 original plot-friedly stories about post-battle of Hogwarts. And well...this absolutely the best story from them.

The thing which I really like in this story (or what ever you wanna call it) is that these things you are writing could actually be those what happens to your loved characters. Nothing too fancy or similar. Life seems to go forward as it was, of course war has it's influence to characters, but Harry seems to be that Harry, whose events of life I used read from Rowling's books, Ron is Ron etc. I love this, keep it going like that. Only thing what have changed from books is that I like the character of Ginny even more when written by you than Rowling (she is so lovely).

Since I've readed only the Philosopher's Stone and the Deatly Hallows in English (rest only in Finnish) I can't say for sure how close your style to write is to Rowling. But was it near or far away, I love it.

Reading all of chapters in row (and 2 times again after that) made me want to have more, much more. So chapter 15 quickly out, I wanna read it. Until that that I just have to reread these previous chapters...

(hopefully you'll figure out what I'm trying to say: I want more things to read ;))

ps. hopefully this didn't came as a double post (had some problems when sending)

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Wow, what a lovely review. I'm so glad you found my story so much to your liking. I obviously agree with you 100% about the characters staying true to the originals. I think the reason Ginny is a bit different than Rowling's is because she wasn't in the books very much and hardly at all in the movies. (at least for my taste)
I am going to work on finishing the next chapter, this weekend. If there are other suggestions you have or requests for mini-plot lines, please let me know. 
Thanks for your wonderful review!

LOVE the story, um i don't know how to say it in a way that makes sense, you times everything so perfect and tempered it as well. still waiting for the next update. have fun with it :)

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Thank you, thank you, thank you! I am having fun with it, but real life has caused me to take a very long time with my next update. Please be patient and thanks for the review!

Very good so far cant wait to see what happens next!

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Thank you. Glad you liked it. I am still tweeking the next chapter, so be patient! And, thanks for the review!

Good chapter.  I'm glad to see a whole chapter dedicated to such a short period of time.  Lots of detail and character interaction.

Keep it up!

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Thanks! I do love to drag the emotions of the characters out, don't I? ;)
Thanks for your encouraging review. Hope to hear form you again, soon.
~Tania

Well aren't you the cheeky one!  Updating so quickly.  I guess I have to declare you the winner because I'm not even close to updating mine.

Now on to your chapter - Wow!  That was really good!  I might be going out on a limb, but that might have been your best chapter.  You hit a homerun with that one.  The angst and the drama were superb, and the way you wrote Harry's seesawing emotions was spot on.  For awhile there I almost thought you would take Ginny down a different path, being at Neville's and all, glad to see you didn't, it would really make things murky between them.  You did a fanatastic job on this one Tania!  Well done you!

PS - Okay so I'm not ready to update HPDB (maybe in a month or so, part of the delay centers on Beta issues), but I plan to post the first chapter of a new short story I started about a month ago.  The plot bunny just wouldn't let go of me.  Should post it in about a week.  Hope to have a secon chapter up by mid to late June.  Give it a read and let meknow what you think.  TTYL - Mike

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Well, hello there! Yes, victory is sweet. :)
I already had most of this chapter written at the same time as the last, so it didn't take me long to get it finished and polished. 
I'm flattered you think this is my best chapter. That means I really am getting better as I go along. But, you know that angst and drama are my forte! So, this was an easier chapter for me to write.
I will look forward to reading your other story, but don't let HPDB get too far behind. It really is a good story and I'd like to see what you do with it. 
BTW, have you read the new story by seeker68? Check it out if you have any time. Pretty creative plot line.
Until next time...
~Tania

When dealing with the horrors they all went through it's natural to take paths that seem right , but aren't. One can only know when it's the wrong path, only after taking them. This is what Ginny has done. I suppose age has a bit to do with it, as is life experience, before the trauma. You've really brought the depth of the characters to this fiction. For that, I thank you. I've a feeling things will move a little smoother from here on. I think another reason for the reappearance of Harry's nightmares, was Ginny blocking their connection. Not only did that worry Harry, but it hurt him because of that connection. Very Good, it was actually needed.

Author Response

Yeah, I think it was needed. I wasn't intending for the story to take this turn, but there you go! Looking back now, it does make sense. I agree with your words of wisdom about going down wrong paths. That's true for all of us...
Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. I really appreciate your insight!

love your ending so far

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Thanks, mud 12!

oh no! what's going to happen to Harry and Ginny? by the way this chapter is awesome!!! what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^

1000/10

Harry and Ginny

Author Response

I know, right? It's so dramatic. I guess we'll have to wait and see...But, don't worry, our couple will always find a way to make it through. I'll do the best I can with the updates. Thanks so much for your kind review and continued readership!

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