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ErMahGawd! Rose is such a bitchy drama queen! She's so totally awesome!
Love your story

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I love that you wrote Rose not as the perfect daughter/student/friend/girl, but as the mean girl of the story. I think that is a great idea.
I hate her!
I think the argument between her and Scorpius and Naomi was really great.
 "No, she just high fived your face."  that line was my favorite from the chapter. I still laugh about it.
I love the way you write and your story so far!

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I actually kind of love and hate Rose. But she's mean. But its totally funny. And I like Amy. And Ron's reaction (:

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Haha, I know what you mean :)
Woo, fans for Amy, that rarely ever happens.
Thanks for the review! xxx

aw poor naomi! i really hate amy but im warming to rose, even though she was super mean to naomi!
and i love the sexual tension between scorpius and rose - they would make the BEST couple

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Ah, I know! Aha, that's good, I guess? :D
Hahahaha, yeah, Rose and Scorpius ftw xx

i looove it!!! nice chappie!!!

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Thankyou!! xxx

the story idea is great but i really dont like Rose. haha this actually really reminds me of Mean Girls but maybe thats partly because Lindsay Lohan is on the banner ...
anyway. Scorpius is awesome and so is Naomi but Rose is such a bitch! And so is Amy, you so wouldnt want to get on the wrong side of her. Basically, please tell me that Rose changes a bit throughout the course of the story.
But very well written so well done :)

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I'm glad you like the idea :)
Don't worry, you're not actually meant to like Rose at this point, but she's going to get better every chapter. (Or that's what I'm aiming to do)
I'm so happy you like my writing :D xx

meh, not liking it much (no offense to you, of course, just my personal opinion). rose is a total brat. next chapter..

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I appreciate that you actually took the time to read it before saying your opinion. It's so fustrating when people automatically shun your story when all they've read is the first sentance.
Rose is pretty spoilt, isn't she? :P xx

this is interesting so far. but there are a few inconsistencies:
in chapter one, i think you initially said jack, but then you changed to jake. also, it seemed as if rose wanted to hook up with jack, but then she suddenly doesnt. just wanted to point that out.

but other than that, its a very different and amusing take on rose. i like how you have her secrets. but yes, i HATE rose and co at teh moment. seriously, what awful girls.
8.5/10 (im docking for inconsistency)

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I'm glad you like it so far :]
Woops, I'll go change that Jake right away - it's meant to be Jack. And, you're right, now that I look back on it Rose does seem overly keen and then suddenly cold towards him. It was meant to be a front for Amy when I was writing it but it does seem kind of weird now. I think it's when I was editing it all, I might have changed some things so I'll go fix that! Thankyou for pointing it out, I really appreciate it! :]
I'm glad you like how Rose is portrayed, even if you don't actually like HER. It still amazes me that some people can :P
Thankyou for the review!! xx

I love Hermione's punishment and if it were me it'd be no punishment because I happen to have a slight soft spot for Neville. And Herbology. Oh, and Scorpius? We won't even go there. :)

Anyways, seeing as this has little to do with the chapter, I'd say I happen to love Rose and co. They are 'real' teenage girls and few writers actually manage to dipict that whilst writing. Love it. xx.

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Ooh, me too! I love Neville - I just find him completely adorable and innocent. 
I'm glad you like Rose and her friends. I always read the books where the friends of the main character are completely perfect and, frankly, it annoys me. Most teenagers aren't actually like that!
Thankyou! :] xx

haha, i love scorpius! he's so funny and sweet and i think he still kind of cares about rose even though they're not friends anymore. and that bit with naomi got me going 'ahh!' lol. she sounded really sweet and everything until she slapped rose. lol. that was funny.
10/10

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I'm so happy you like him! :D
I was worried he'd be less likable because he isn't the usual hot bad boy he usually is. 
Haha, Naomi DID sound sweet didn't she? :P
Thankyou!! xx

"No, she just high fived your face." Hahaha, I love Scorpius but he needs more parts! Well then, off to the next chapter :)

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Hehe, I love Scorpius too :]
And, don't worry, from now on Scorpius is going to be in nearly every chapter. Don't you just hate it when ex-friends pop up everywhere? (Mwahaha)
:]
xx

I like this Rose. I also like secrets #1 & #5 they rock!!

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I'm glad you like Rose! :D
Haha, Rose really is the best sister ever with those secrets. xx

YAAAY scorpius, I like him 
that was an uncool Rose and i really don't like her at all well hopefully she will have some sort of redeeming quality cuase yea uncool much!

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Hehe, I like him too :D
Yeah, Rose is pretty much a bitch. xx

actually i like rose and her friends, they don't seem fake.minus marisa hahhaa
but i do think shes a shallow...so i am guessing that louis is also popular? anyways i like you story a lot, very interesting with her past friendship with the family friends plus scrop.

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Haha, I like them too :D
Minus Marissa of course.
Yeah Louis is popular too, but he's in the year above so they don't really hang out in school much.
I'm so glad you like it! xx

Rose is baddd! 
I love how she didnt remember Scorpius's cousin name!
10/10

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She totally is :]
Eek, thankyou!! xx

and it gets better! i love Ron and Hermione :) you've got them down pat!

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Hehe, thankyou!!
Ron and (sometimes) Hermione are one of my characters so it's good to hear I didn't completely ruin them :D
Which would completely suck
Anyhoo, thanks for the review!!
xx

Huh. Well then. That was an interesting way to start off the chapter. A fight with former friends. Well then. That was a bit.. mean what she said to Scorpius. And pointing her wand at people isn't exactly the nicest thing to do. And of course she gets to kiss some rather dodgy character. And woo, Louis! He sounds cool! And her friends are so trashed.. and oh, look! It's Ron! Which means.. Rose is probably is MASSIVE amounts of trouble! That sucks. Yeah.. they got pretty extreme.. then again, I doubt this is the first time Rose has ever done anything liek this.

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Haha, yeah
Rose is going to get better after the whole fight with former friends! I just had to show how much on unfriendly terms her and Scorpius are ;]
Yay, Ron! I've got to admit, I love him =]
And she totally will get in massive trouble
xx

ah this is such a good plot!! keep wrighting cause i like were its headed...and can scorp and rose get together??plz??

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Thankyouuu! I'll probably keep writing this story because I like writing how bitchy Rose/Amy are :D
And Rose/Scorpius will totally get together soon-ish (Hopefully)
xx

OMG Continue continue continuee! IM OFFICIALLY OBSESSED! 
Didja get the whole I like amy better from now on you shall be amy thing from One Tree Hill!


I LOVEE ELOVE LOVE ONE TREE HILL

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Yay! I'm so glad you like it!! 
And is THAT where the 'I like Amy' thing is from? I was slightly suspicious that I'd heard it before. Meh
I love One Tree Hill too :D
Chad Michael Murray anyone?

If you don't continue, I will 0__0

Okay, maybe not, but I really want to see Rose come on down off her high horse.

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Hahaha, Rose is definately going to come off her high horse :D
xx

hey I love this story, its pretty aswome so far. I really like how Rose is the popular one, normally its always the guy in stories, so this is actually nice for a change! Can't wait to see where you take this story next!

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I'm so happy you like it :D
I always read stories where the girl is the nerdy one so I thought I'd put a different spin on it
Woohoo ;]
xx

great chapter
update soon (:

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Thankyou! xx

Ohh I love Rose.
I mean I love her.
I know she's a total bitch but she's great.
I can't get over it!
10/10
and favourited!

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I'm glad you like Rose and her bitchiness :D
Thanks for the rating and the favourited-ness! xxx

UM... i never thought Rose would act like a b* * * *, But good story

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Roses a total cow :D
But I'm glad you like the story!! xx

I love how this fic is going so far!!! Keep it up~

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Thankyou! :D xx

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