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I really like this story so far!  It's really different for once to have a less popular Scorpius and a popular Rose.

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This is really good! Most times Scorpius is the popular one and Rose is the one left to rot.

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Thank you! I'm so happy you like the idea :) xxx

I really like it. I like the fact that she's a bitch but she knows it. And Amy is cool. And so is Ron! Hermione totally hates Amy, but Ron likes her. Keep it up. It's awesome! C:

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Yay, I'm so happy you like it! Aha, I'm glad you like Amy - nobody really seems to do. :)

Ah, thankyou so much!! xxx

i like the idea of a popular rose and an unpopular scorpius! its so different and creative!

good first chapter, though i hate rose >:[

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I'm so glad you like it! Thankyou :)
Aha, don't worry, that's pretty much customary at this point xx

oh. my. god. its scorpius malfoy! hot! ahaha. i really like this story so far. i loved it how u included her ten secrest (two of them in this chapter) in the story. btw. i love this banner! its so cool and like, different from the others. well, im going onto the next chapter! yayayayay

x
saffy

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Ah, isn't he just? ;)
I'm glad you liked the secrets! 
And, yes, the banner is amazing, isn't it? SwissMiss is a miracle worker
xxx

Meeep I love Scorpius :)))
And also you wrote Celina and then you changed it to Selena.
I love the story!!!

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EEE me too! :D
And oh gosh, thankyou so much for pointing that out! I'm such an idiot when it comes to proof reading. All this stuff just skims right over my head.
Aw, thankyou!! xx

Ooh! I can simply not wait to read the next chapter. That's odd. Popular Rose? Less popular Scorpius? I thought it was around the other way? Still ... I like it! 10/10

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Yay! I'm glad you like it!! All your reviews are so awesome :D
Yeah, I'm one of those people who kind of don't stick to traditions. (Yeah, I can just hear those sarcastic REBEL's in peoples head)
xx

i like this story. great potential :D

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Thankyou! I'm glad you like it :D xx

huh, this is different. i don't find rose likable atm, but i'm sure she'll get better :). good start, off to next chapter!

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I'm glad you find it different even if you don't like Rose (honestly, I don't blame you) :]
Thanks! xx

I am going to have to comment every chapter, which I absolutely despise, because your story is beyond anything else I've read on here. (and to be honest, I've read hundreds of stories.) In short: I love this story, and I have, since I read the first paragraph. xx.

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Wow! Thankyou so much! I actually feel honoured that you're commenting all my chapters :D
I'm almost blushing :] xx

Ooh! I'm guessing you were inspired by Sophie Kinsella's Can You Keep A Secret? Awesome book, isn't it? :D

Oh, and I like the idea of a popular Rose and a less popular Scorpius! It's certainly different! :D

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Sort of, yep! I was waiting for someone to pop up saying that because the first secret is pretty much inspired off of that :]
I'm glad you like my version of Rose! :D xx

Like it. a lot but I think Scorpius should be just a LITTLE less erm loser-ish. Just because I think if he was hot he'd be just a tiny bit popular. even like equal to the drama geeks in the real world. Not like a COMPLETE and total loser.

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I'm glad you like it :]
Scorpius's not exactly a complete loser but since he doesn't hang out with Rose and co. she see's him like that. xx

I love it! The first paragraph got my attention. Rose is completely diffrent from her parents, she's more of a wild child. :)

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I'm so happy you like it!! I worked hard on the first paragraph to draw readers in so it's great to know it worked on someone :D
And Rose is a total rebel ;] xx

ah, i'm so glad i found this story! and do you know how i found it? i searched my name (rose) in the find a story search. lol. but this story is really good, i'm really enjoying it! all the secrets - which i'm guessing will be at every start and every end of the chapters - are so cool! that's a really good idea putting them in. and your rose is such a refreshing change from the usual bookworm nerd rose. the ending was brilliant, too. with scorpius and a cliffhanger - well done!
10/10! bravo, i'm off to read the next chapters.

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Haha, thankyou! I'm glad you're enjoying it and that you don't completely hate the crazy bitch Rose :]
xx

love the start when her and her mum are argueing and she snatchs the magazine out of her hands!

i love amy as well shes so funny!

this was amazing to read! some ultra funny bits in there! i like how you described everything, but not to much.

and i love the ending with Scorpius Malfoy! :D

That Jack seems like a typical guy!

I will continue to read this - adding it to favs

and i love the banner, its utterly stunning + the chapter image!

I would love your opinion on some of mine if its not to much trouble?

100/100!

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I'm so glad you like it! I hate writing the beginnings - I think they're so hard to start off with - so it means a lot that you like it :D
The decription is always one of my weak points so it's a relief that you like it! 
Ahh, Scorpius. What I'd kill to have a guy like that show up at my house ;]
And Jack is completely the typical guy. He's pretty much based on most boys in my school but maybe a little exaggerated.
I love the banner too! And the chapter images are to die for. Courtesy of SwissMiss and delta :D
Yeah, I'll definately read yours! In fact, I'll do it now because the only thing I'm doing now is packing (which I hate.)
Thankyou!! xx

I love the flow of the story and how in the end, Scorpius shows up. Great way to end a chapter! You left me with wanting to read more. Speaking of which, I'm off to read the next chapter.

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I'm so glad my story flows well! I was told by my english teacher that my stories were 'too choppy' so it's really nice to hear that you don't think it is :]
Haha, I know! I'm such a sucker for cliffhangers.
xx

OHMYGOD
Why did you change the title???!
I loved the one before and this one looks like half the fanfics out there now!
Obv I will still read but just saying I preferee the last one

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Ah, I'm sorry! :[
I kind of thought the old was a bit, I don't know, corny? And I think the new one describes the story a little better. Love: Scorpius, obviously. Lies: all those secrets. Lipstick: Just Rose in general ;]
I still have the old banner with the old title on it so I might change it back.
I'm glad you'll still read it though :D
xx

I really like your style of writing and from the first paragraph you had pulled me in (: I'd like to notify you of a grammatical error: During the whole "Am not!" "Are to!" argument (bril, by the way), the word "too" should be used instead of "to". Just a little correction for ya (:

Also, instead of writing BREAK, you could type in "hr" within brackets and there will be a nice line between the two segments! 

I really like the premise of your story and can't wait to see Scorp and Rose together (: great chapter!

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Eee, thankyou! My english teacher told me once that it was too choppy so I tried to not make it. Also, I think she has a personal vendetta against me ever since I accidently spilled coffee on her. It was cold, though, so I didn\\\'t get in too much trouble :]
Thankyou for spotting that! I\\\'ve just changed it along with a few other things. 
And as for the BREAK thing, well I was actually meant to do the line but I accidently overlooked it. Haha. I just had a little trouble with Word (God knows how) and had to start writing BREAK everywhere. So thanks for that! :D
I\\\'m so glad you like it!! xx

Love the twist =D Its nice having them portrayed as real teenagers for a change. Love it =)

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Haha. I\\\'m so glad you like it!
Yeah, I read loads of books where most of the teenagers in it are completely perfect and would never throw parties or get drunk. We\\\'re not actually like that :]
xx

Wow, Rose is seriously childish.  Like, in total American teenager mode.  Your style of writing is great and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

P.S-- please tell me Scorpius isn't a jerkwhore.

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She completely is :]
Thankyou so much!
And Scorpius isn\\\'t a jerkwhore in this - I love him too much for that. He\\\'s just a little pissed off at Rose and kinda classic Malfoy arrogont but still sweet :]
xx

I LIKE IT
hahahah had to say that oh man i cant wait till rose gets in trouble im excited and i wonder what scorpius is doing at the party!

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I\\\'m glad you like it :D
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I love this!
Such a fun way to portay Rose!

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Yay, I'm so glad you like it! :D

wow, amazing start! i love your Rose. she's fabulous - very unique, very different :D

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Yay! I'm so glad you like the beginning! I was kinda worried that it was a little 'meh' for the start of a story so THANKYOU! :D
xx

Woo, I like the idea that Rose is nothing like her mom or dad. Completely a wild child. Love it. Gooo parties when the parents aren't home! And I like the number of secrets she has. That's a very interesting last one to the list. And I bet it's gonna lead to a good bit of drama. My, that Jack guy is disgusting. And while it was cruel.. had to laugh at what she did to Selena. I love 'w'itchy characters, so fun.

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I'm so happy you like it!! I read a few stories where Rose is a lot like Hermione (being a nerd, basically) so I thought I'd make her different :D
The last secret is most definately going to lead to a whole lot of drama.
I like 'w'itchy characters too! And they're fun to write as well ;]
xx

I'm enjoying this story so far. I like Rose being popular for a change but there are a few mistakes - you changed the spelling of Selena/Celina a couple of times. I also think you jump from moods a bit quickly but that's not really a major issue. Hermione and Ron are portrayed very well; congrats. Other than that I think you're writing is strangley like that of Meg Cabot and am enjoying it so far.

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I'm glad you like it :D
Sorry for the mistakes! I'm not the best one it comes to rereading it all but I'll try and change it 
Whoa, like Meg Cabot? You're so nice =D
xx

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