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Chapter: "You can see his bott- !" | Story: A Lifetime of - What? NO!

hahaha!! OMG that made me laugh!!! hahaha!! i LOVED it!! it was AMAZING!! :D

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LMAO
this was hilarious

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This is brilliant - just how I imagine holiday life to be. Great job 10/10! (Iwish I could give it more!)

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:D Thank you! 

Sadly my holidays are never as eventful or funny as this... but it's good to imagine. :D Maybe without Ron's bum... but there you go :)

Thanks for reviewing! And the rating. :D

I feel so sorry for Ron.

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Yes... I did feel mean to him writing this chapter... but nothing beats some really childish humour sometimes :D

I love how the chapter started out with the kids running amok and the adults being fairly normal, and then by the end of the chapter the adults were running around like lunatics while the kids watched disapprovingly.

"So that's what evil must look like"...LOL

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Adults are so childish... *shakes head*

I'm not an adult yet (nearly there!!) and I swear that I have more maturity than all the adults I know put together. 

Maybe that's a bit untrue... :)

omg poor Ron. lol whats going to happen to Harry and Ginny???  I feel so sorry for Ron, And Hermione has gone mad!!! this is a really good story, very funny. xxx

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:) Thank you :)

Funniness is what I aim for! :D I imagine that Harry and Ginny will sort out their "disagreement" once they've finished their water fight. 

And yes... poor Ron indeed; I can't imagine anything worse!!

Oh dearie me. I haven't laughed like that for a while.

I thought it was hilarious. I love the parents' attitudes - Ginny's tickle threat is so familiar: my mother does that all the time!

I love how close they all are. It's really cute and I LOVE Lily

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Thank you! 

I try to get the whole "family unity" thing because I just imagine them all living like brothers/ sisters. 

Lily is pretty cool!

Oh, how hilarious! Ron...shorts pulled down...oh no! This was a really fun chapter, and well written. Cant wait for the next one.

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:D Thank you! 

Lol the shorts thing was childish... but hey! I'm only 15, there are some things that will always remain timeless when it comes to humour!

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