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Chapter: Prologue | Story: The Whisper of Red Roses

Nice chapter! Romantic and passionate. Liked it.

Author Response

Hehe.. Thank you so much love..

xox 

Skizzy

Great start for a story! I can tell you've really thought out your characters and know where you're going with this story. That kind of thing makes readers jump and review. Good for you! If you need a beta, I'd be glad to help. This story has serious potential! Check my profile for the email address (:

Author Response

Thanks for your review rougette. Yeah It took me awhile to think up this story and the plot, but I knew that Severus had to be in it. :)

Thanks

Skizzy

Definitely you should carry on!  Keep going! 

(I guess I shouldn't be surprised that you're a Snape fan, eh?)

The voice here is well done, and it's lovely to see the more tender side of Snape.  Nice work.

Paloma

Author Response

Yes i am defiantly a Snape fan, I love him.
Yeah his tender said is good to see. But I may not always be like that. Thanks for the review.

Skizzy

CARRY ON PLEASE. :D
I kive a good snape/oc it was such a beautiful chapter and so sad. Can't wait to read more so update soon. 10/10!!

Lore

Author Response

Haha, your review made me really happy. Im working on my next chapter right now actually, it should be up in a week or so.

Thank you
Skizzy

just returning the favour. i think it is wonderful and you should definatly keep writing

Author Response

Haha, thank you lupin. This chapter great to write and im on my second chappie. :D

Skizzy

Alright I could say it was good but then I would be lieing. This story wasn't good but very good! I can't wait to see were this leads to and Suri is my favioret name for a girl so good chioce. Please update soon this story is a little addicting and I need to find out what happens next!
Lol
Slytherin Pride

Author Response

Lol, I love this review. Im working on the next chapter now, should be ready soon.

Skizzy

It has a good story line. There are a few typos here and there but otherwise is good and I would like to read more. I like the name of the baby, Suri, it is very cute. You definitely carry on!

Author Response

Thanks, I know I need a beta.
Im onto my next chapter, should be ready soon.

Hi!
It's hard to judge the story so far, maybe it was a bit rushed, but you have a place for improvement.  Anyway, I see no reason for not continuing. If you have got an idea and started your first story, you should definitely continue.

Author Response

It was a little bit rushed but it my first chappie.
Thanks Skizzy

Carry on, carry on!!!

Author Response

Wow first review. Make me feel special. Thank you.

Skizzy

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