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Chapter: All for Love | Story: Sparkling Angels

OK I like where this story is going but you seriously need to work on your spelling and grammar. Half the time I can't tell whose talking and you mix the words up into the wrong order. I really am not being mean, just offering helpful criticism. 
Please continue writing, I do like your story and ideas.

~Slytherin_Princess44

PS. I think you might need to go back and read what you've written in previous chapters because some of what you are saying now doesn't make sense anymore.

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omg this story is fabulouse! please write mre i luv it XD cnt wait to know wot alice saw tht she aint tellin them XD x

natalie x

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I actually really like this story, i read many were people try the two stories and don't do so well. 
But i think you did good. Can't wait for Hermione/Jacob action.

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still cant wait to see how Hermione react to Jacob showing up
update soon plz..im dying to read more

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hey its AC32 i love the chapters and please write more chaps and stories like this I have to give you 300/300 well goodbye for now  am writing a story at the moment but it waiting for vaildtion am gonin' to amercia on a road trip on the 2nd till 20th of april byebyexx

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wow! hehe, more more more! lol sorry, you're very good at writing. it's interesting seeing my favorite characters from both sets joined together in one unique story. now i'm just waiting for the next chapter. =)

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i'm glad you like it! next chapter will be finished hopefully in the next few days x

great!! just a few spelling errors!! 9/10 =]

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I LOVE THIS STORY! only one problem... you dont update often with more chapters, and i have to wait forever for the next chapter... it makes me sad.:( please update more often... i'm begging you!!

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i'll do my best, it took a while for the last one as i had a little bit of writers block.next chapter will be up for validation at the end of the week x

I was beginning to think that you were not going to update.  I really like this story.  I’m still waiting to find out what was up with Jacob and Hermione. Please update as soon as possible so that I can find out. :D

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i have started the next chapter and hopefully will have it up for validation by the end of the weekend, the next chapter will concentrate on jacob and hermione x

i really love ur story!! just plz update as fast as u can.=D

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thanxs, the next chapter had been started x

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