Harry Potter Fanfiction – Read Over 85,000 Stories!

Hi, I was looking for a good James II/OC story on the forums and I stumbled across this one! I think this starter is really good: its full of detail, yet left me asking lots of questions; I understand it, yet I'm really confused!
~ Macy x

Author Response

this looks fantastic! i'll carry on reading :)

Author Response

this sounds intense. i can't wait to see what happens! =D

Author Response

Why does this chapter has only 27 reviews? It deserves more, more, more! I found this story yesterday before I had to go to sleep, and decided to read it now when I have the time. I only really just have read this chapter so far, but man, this sounds so good! Exactly my type of story. And the best part? It's completed! I love next generation's stories but there arn't so many that are actually finished, sadly. That's why i'm so happy about this!! And it includes pregnancy! (I'm a sucker for unexpected pregnancies stories, haha) ok i'm going to read next chapter now, sorry for my long review.

Awesome prologue!!

Author Response

I thought that you completely nailed the prologue in this fic. You managed to lay down a good deal of groundwork, making it clear that the girl was in love with James, but he was marrying someone else. That was a great hook, because off the bat obviously I want to know who this girl is, whose getting married to James, and what it is that tore James and this girl apart. So you gave information while leaving a lot to learned, which is important. (I'm pretty sure that all my 'hers' 'she's' and 'whose' make no sense, but I tried xD)

Author Response

ooOO this sounds like it'll be a well written heart wrencher of a story...!
It sounds very interesting so far. And I'm so looking forward to reading the lead up to the wedding and about the main character's friendship with James. I think I like the main character, she seems like a cool cat of a character so far and it'll be interesting to read more about her :D

For some strange reason I'm really interested in who the lady with the peacock hat. She's reminding me of Great Aunt Muriel ;) 

An awesome start for so few words! It's sounding rather good :)
Amberfire

Author Response

This was an amazzingg chapter! I felt so sad for her and the way you worded it was very well done!

Author Response

Wow, this definetley looks interesting so far!

Added to favourites

Author Response

Ok, I for one would just like to say thank god. I reread this chapter and am quite happy. See I read it a long time ago (and never reviewed sorry) and I thought that it ended with her sitting in the pews alone with her son, after the wedding. Either I am delusional, thinking of something else, or you changed it. Either way I really don't care, because this means she still has a chance with James, because they aren't officially married in this part! Don't let me down :(

Author Response

wow, best prologue iv'e read, i think, really cool!
can't wait to read on! :)
becky 

10/10!

Author Response

Hey Molly! I've heard people rambling on in very exuberant and excited about this story forever now, over at TGS (I'm Alex, by the way, if you didn't know, and also cared to =]) and since today is my last day of freedom from school and exams, I figured I'd start reading it. I feel as though that was a run-on sentence. Oh well...

Okay, so I really like the way this started. I don't have a whole lot to say because I just can't think of stuff until I know the characters better. But judging by the premise of this story, which is entirely too clever and funny yet sad at the same time, and by your hysterical writing style, I'd say I'm going to enjoy this a lot!

Just wanted to drop you a quick review and let you know that I love it so far =]

~CBG

Author Response

MOLLY! WHY DID I WAIT SO LONG TO READ THIS?!?!

Gah. This is actually brilliant. It's so original and refreshing, I'm so excited to see where this goes. 

Dani

Author Response

I DON'T KNOW. MAYBE BECAUSE YOU HAVE MUCH BETTER THINGS TO DO THAN READ MEDIOCRE STORIES WRITTEN BY YOURS TRULY?

You flatter me unnecessarily. It's hardly original, but I'm glad you like it! ILY

this seems like a really interesting premise for a story. i'll keep reading - love it!

bexx

Author Response

ohh good opening chapter! I really think I am going to like this story! I already love how this has been set up and cant wait to read what happens!! xx

Author Response

Thank you very much for your kind words.  It's my only hope that I don't disappoint you.

ohhh :) this is verry intresting! love it already! :) :) :)

Author Response

Good to know!  I hope your opinion continues in this vein. XD

Yikes! This is a great setup. I'm so curious to see where this all goes and hear the details of this poor woman's life. Onward I go...

Author Response

Yay! I'm glad you're curious to find out. Thanks for reading.

Wow, I loved this chapter. It's definitely keeping me interested and I have favorited it. 10/10

Author Response

Oh yay! Another favourite. Thanks for the review.

omg i looove this! you are such a talented writer.

Author Response

*bows* Thank you, thank you!

so funny with the peacock!

arr poor her, having to watch her best friend get married to james potter!

it was fab though, i am so reading more!

i love the banner as well!

i was wondering perhaps if you could review my new story - nursery rhymes?

10/10

Author Response

How on earth did I only just find this story?!

I loved every one of the 900 and whatever words on the screen. I'd forgotten how much I love your writing. :)

I don't know how long ago you posted this chapter and wrote your author's note, so my squeeing may be a little bit too late and unnecessary now, but here goes anyway. SQUEE, you're re-writing What It Is To Burn?! Please tell me you're still doing that :D

Onto the next chapter of this story, anyway :)

<i>Jessica</i>

Author Response

I don\\\'t know, but I\\\'ve been missing your reviews! They always used to make me so happy, so when I saw this one, I squealed at the top of my lungs. So, thank you for that!

About What It Is To Burn re-write. . .unfortunately, that\\\'s been a bit - er - derailed. It\\\'s ongoing, but very slow. As in I\\\'ve only got seven of the original 36 chapters written so. . .yeah, I\\\'ll leave it at that. If you want to see the minor changes I\\\'ve made, just let me know through a PM or something - I believe you have my email address? If not, just ask and you shall receive.

Interesting so far.. I like it.

Author Response

OMG! i had no idea that you wrote what it is to burn!! that is like one of my favourite stories ever!! i think it is what got me into sirius stories!! so i would just like to say thank you for writing that masterpiece of a fanfic and i am so looking forward to reading this story. so far is sounds fan-bloody-tastic!

Author Response

Yes, I am the one who wrote "What It Is To Burn". I'm glad you liked that story, for I had a great time writing it. It took a little over a year, but at least I managed to crank it out, you know? Lol. Thank you for reviewing this story and I hope you like this one as much as WIITB.

Hey i didn't reveiw your first few chapters-im ever so sorry about this i get lazy lol But i promise i will be reviewing every chapter for this story from now on...its my favorite story on here, oh and my sister loves it too.
Can you tell me though at the point in time where the chapter above is taken from does james know jacks his son?
I love james...ur pretty damn awesome too lol

Author Response

Oh, don't sweat it. I mean, I appreciate the reviews nonetheless, but if you forget, don't worry about it. Seriously, I don't mind. Lol. I'm glad that you like it, though, and that your sister does too. I can't tell you exactly when James finds out (only that he eventually does), but it's taken from the end of the story. 

And thanks! You're pretty darn awesome too.

Aw, how sweetly disturbing. I shall keep reading this.

I like the story plot and characters. It's very mysterious.

Honecomb. [x]

Author Response

I think you've just written one of my favorite reviews of all time. 'Aw, how sweetly disturbing' is a wonderful line! I'm glad you like it and I hope it satisfies you!

ya know it would help if i actually read the summary thouroughly (sorry sp)... my bad... haha... :)

Author Response

Aw, don't fret about it! It was nothing. Thanks for the pseudo-review though, lol.

Reviews (31 found)

JOIN HARRY POTTER FANFICTION