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Chapter: 'we all want her dead' | Story: Sparkling Angels

Oh my gosh! I love this story. Even though you don't like this chapter, I think it is very important and quite good. I'm not just saying this. I seriously love it! I hope you keep writing FOREVER!
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i really think the ideas you have here are really good :) there are only a few issues i have and they are mainly grammatical but tend to lead to confusion they can however be easily fixed with a beta :) good job though :)

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10/10
best part yet
loved it!

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this is great!!! udate soon!! 9/10 =]

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thanx, next chapter should be up soon xx

It's an interesting chapter. Keep up the good work. I'm very much looking forward to learning more about Hermione's past. Please update soon.

9/10
BG

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i love it its so interesting ... update please.its such a 10/10

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It's a beautiful story. 
Like this chapter a lot. 
One of mine favourite. 
Hope you will update soon :)

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Overall I throughly enjoyed reading this chapter but it seemed a little rushed. That was not a bad thing but it made it a little hard to read in places.
Please update more soon-I can't wait to find out who Hermione's mate will be!

9/10

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