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Chapter: It can’t be, can it! | Story: Sparkling Angels

Awesome, I'm excited!  Twilight and Harry Potter are my favorite fantasy movies :)

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ok. the twilight thing. not so much
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and. a human body can withstand 42 C (i do not know F)
and afterwords the person dies because the heart can not withstand the temperature and stuff
personally have a fever of 41.5 when i was a child and still alive to this day.

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It was awesome! I can't wait to read on!

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Interesting chapter, but it doesn't seem to make a lot of sense. Great start, though. 9/10

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This is a very good start.
Loved it
10/10

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wow this is so kwl i luv it poor hermione = [

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Very well done. You're an excellent writer the only thing I'd say is you need to proofread your chapter. I found a few mistakes spelling wise. Other than that I really enjoyed it. I haven't quite pieced it all together how Esme and Carlisle know Hermione, but I'm sure I'll find out in the next chapters. Oh, and I didn't see if you did or not, but you need to add a spoilers warning from when Esme said that Bella's joined them. 

Great story!

9/10

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thanx for the review, hermiones relationship with the cullens will be more understandable in the next few chapters, thanx for reminding be about the spoiler warning i keep forgetting about that

xx

wow!!! gotta love those vampires!! 9/10 =]

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This is interesting...I can't wait to see where this goes. Can I ask who Hermione will be paired up with please?

Hope to read more soon.

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thanxs, i am still unsure of who i will be pairing hermione with x

This is rlly good! can't wait for the next chapter!!

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thanxs its on its way x

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