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Chapter: Like Mother, Like Son | Story: Paint Me Malice

Wow!! I loved it. I'm sensing some Dramione... 
A very original and fascinating idea. I'd love to hear more about how Blaise feels about his notorious mother. The mystery that pervades this is chilling, but the humour (underwear in Draco's bin!!) is hilarious.

I can't wait for more!

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This is an incredibly original fic. You succeeded in keeping the reader in suspense through-out the entire chapter and I am incredibly intrigued to know where this is going - please continue with it!

infinity/10

~Luna xxx

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Thanks so much, I will!

well this is certainly different from anything else i have read on hpff, and i'm very intrigued to find out more, so i hope you decide to continue as it's very well written!!

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Thanks so much! Yeah, something a little different for me to write; a challenge I guess lol xx

It's interesting!  I really want to know more.

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Thanks! :P x

Continue if you please. This prolougue really grabs the reader.

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Thanks, I will :) x

Okay, I got confused a couple of times but I finally caught on. It was really a great chap. I can't wait to read the next chapter

Great Chap,
Constance
10/10

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Thanks so much ^_^ xoxox

I must say, this is very nicely written, the vocabulary is great and I think the subject is very interesting.

I'm still a bit unsure as to why he poisons his wife.  It gives me the impression that he has lost his mind a little, maybe that he fears that she will kill him if he doesn't get her first, but then again, he seems to love her.  His father, is he a ghost?  That's the impression I got.  Hopefully, you will continue with this and it will all be explained in more detail.

It's certainly a very intriguing fiction.  The only thing I've noticed (but don't worry if you want to make it AU) is that Blaise is actually black in HP, so the blue eyes and the "normally tanned" skin obviously don't seem to fit, but if you want him to look different, well, why not!

I think you capture his tortured soul very well, though.

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Thanks so much :)

He poisons his wife in a spur-of-the-moment thing. It all relates back to Draco. You'll see. His father isn't a ghost. It's a memory. :)

Thanks again (: Yeah, I know Blaise is meant to be black... but, for some reason, I always pictured him tanned. I don't really know why... 

Thanks so much :)

Wow. Just wow, i really am loving this so far! and you thought that you couldn't compete with Skin&Bones_! This is seriously amazing! I love it so far, very very interesting! It makes me want to know more!

I really like the way that you made the reader think that Blaise was going to kill himself. You had me fooled! :) Very nice! 

Also, I like the way the memories were worked in. The way that you wrote this sounded very fluid, words strung together magically! (are you using a quick quotes quill? lol) Very lovely though, 

A  VERY well deserved 10/10 

Eagerly awaiting more:
KaraBlack

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Thankyou so, soo much ^_^ I could never compete with Skin&Bones_!! XD xx

So, What I gather is that Blaise' mother killed his father, and his wife was planning to do the same?
Amazing detail, amazing. I loved it, excellent story, you definately do have talent.

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Thanks soo much ^_^ xx

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