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Chapter: The Two Travelers | Story: Up the River

makes me want to read more

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keep reading and reviewing! I greatly appreciate the positive feedback!

hey
this is a really cool story so far iv just started reading it and i already like it
good job
xox

Author Response

thanks alot! I always appreciate the reviews. Sorry about the lateness of my chapters. With finals and everything else going on i'm trying to publish another within the next week

what the fuc** i loved it so much the was so much drama and excitment in this chapter wow. so much i couldnt stop reading. so much was happening. amazing how the stranger healed her, its kinda like the movie atlantic (KEDA)
please do this again wow i cant wait !

Author Response

i'm glad you liked it. keep reading because it gets even better

This is so weird.

Author Response

if you don't like it then don't read it

Very good so far.

There are a couple of spelling errors.  Also Hogwarts has an anti disapparation jinx so people can't apparate in.  Apparition seems essential to your plot so you need some reason for the jinx to be lifted.

Otherwise grat job 8/10

Author Response

in a recent update of my latest chapter it was told that because the merlin time turner was so powerful it could break the anit apparition jinxes. thank you for your concern. i fixed that almost immediately

oh wow! that was realy good! i hope you write more chaps!

Author Response

i have just finished the next draft of chapter two: Awakenings and Introductions. i just have to find some free time in the couple of days to type it. questions will be answered

im so lost but yay hermione dident die!! wright more a.s.a.p!

Author Response

i've just finished the final draft of chapter two: Awakenings and Introductions. it will be out in the next week. don't worry questions will be answered. please have some of your friends read and review. i work best on feedback

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