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Chapter: My Dark Guardian | Story: The Call of the Ancestors

Yay - an update to Gwen's side of the story! I liked the part with the Dark Riders - especially her last thought <i> I didn't know the dark riders had hair </i> - It was also interesting to see Gwen's reaction whe she found out it was Snape that saved her. Again, I can't help but laugh at the scene in Dumbledore's office where he tells Gwen to, "Stop scaring Professor Snape." Still, I don't think of Gwen is a horse theif (as I have said already) and Ashlar really does seem to love her. Gilderoy still hasn't learnt his lesson yet, but we know what will happen next chapter with the Daily Prophet thing, again, I am really looking forward to reading it from Gwen's PoV. Really good chapter - I enjoyed it!

Author Response

I just submitted Gwen's chapter for the Daily Prophet scene so hopefully it will be up soon.
There is much more to come. :)

i love the interactions between Snape and Gwen...you definitely have something going for you here, keep at it

Author Response

Thank you. I really appreciate the comment. There is a lot more to come.

GOOD CAHPIE!!!!  YAY!  Okay, I say it almost all the time, but I can't think of anything more interesting.  Oh well, keep it up!

-dani

Author Response

Awww Thank you. I'm really glad that you have been enjoying the story. There is a LOT more to come. We have only scratced the surface of what these characters will go through so far.

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