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this is really good but y did u have to add another marauder i think that they should always have only the four marauders but that is my opinion and that is funny with and him running in always
she is right about ron and everything

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I had a reason at the time... but I can't think of it now! lol

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haha i get it. thats heaps funny! i love james though! hahaha

10/10

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I love funny... and I love James lol

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Haha! he's been useing the map the whole time!

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LOL yes yes he had. James likes to cause trouble

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that was BRILLIANT. james coming in after remus thought the coast was clear. omg! honestly, this is one of my favorite stories. stupendous job. :)

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Thanks! LOL well James ALWAYS has perfect timing! 

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interesting...I think the marauders map is going to be crucial!  Great chapter hun!  Off I go to the next one!  :) 

10/10

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Okay thanks for reading love! More is on it's way!

OK, this James bit was awesome!! Plain awesome!! 1O/1O

~Sirius

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Hee hee I thought it was rather IC lol thanks for reading!

im sorry but if you were a werewolf there is no WAY you would forget the day of the full moon, i mean their lives revolve around it and they dread it unless theyre a little unbalanced.
ummm shes only a pup, wtf is that? although i thought what the marauders said was funny.
the james thing is quite funny as well

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Remus only temporarily forgot, he was to wrapped up in Hermione and wasn't paying attenetion. Time stops when you fall in love and all that Jazz. The pup thing was because she just became a Werewolf, so she's not used to it yet. And I couldn't think of a better nick name lol.

oohhhhhh. need more!

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hee hee

Awwww... ikle Pup... can't believe it... I still can't remember what you have done and what you havn't done... it'll comeback to me soon. Btw, you spelt Revealed wrong on your chappy title... just fort I'd let you know! :)

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Crap....lol ha ha what do you mean "What I havn't done?" lol

I Love it. Can't wait for more to read :)

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MOre is coming dont worry lol

HEY I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! NEVER EVER I HAVE READ ANYTHING LIKE THIS AND I AM REALLY INTERESTING IN IT. SEND ME AN E-MAIL TO cornet_91@yahoo.com WHEN YOU HAVE UP DATE THE NEXT CHAPTER AND I HOPE IT IS REALLY SOON.^_^

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Will do! It should be updating anytime now

lol! LOVE IT!!!
I love it but would hate to see the end of this story if Dumbledore comes.
*::*tear*::*
BUT I LOVE IT NONELESS!!!!!! I give it a 10 ++

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Thanks! lol I'm so glad you love it!

hhaha I love how James just always walks in right when they get close. I would love to read some more!

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WEll more is on the way....Very soon we find out WHY he has such great timing lol

thats great!!!!!!!!!!!!1 lol thats really greAT!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahha till next time^_^

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lol thanks Im glad you liked it! MOre is on the way! :D

Hahaha! Pup?! Ha! lol! And James is really annoying and yet really funny!!!!! Lol! This is a very good story and its soooo cute!!!! Lol i love it and i hope you update soon plz?!? 

X's nd O's

The Damsel

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I will soon! hee hee lol well more is coming

Brilliant really like it 10/10 *Adds to favorites*

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YAY I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading more coming soon!

James really has a bad sense of timing ... and its so cute that Remus is so protective of Hermione.  Great chapter and please update soon!

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lol I know and it only gets worst as the story moves on! lol Both his protectiveness and James' timeing...I think its in the next chappie we find out WHY he has that timing....or this on im not sure lol

I love your story!!!! keep writing, it's really good and I really mean that. Really really good!!! hurry and updateeee!!

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YAY i'm so glad you like it! I'm completly in love with this story. *Cradles* its my baby!

aww.. they are so cute together, but it's a little gross thinking about when or if she returns, will Remus still love her? will they marry each other?

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NO ONE KNOWS!!!! lol Exept my editor and I! lol ha ha well all shall be revieled.....Eventually!

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