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this is so cool i only wish that harry and ron could have cum with but they would be no help and they cant live in the past for no  reason at all it would probably be against the law but i just want to know why would they send her back in time and all?? they didn't do it for other people but any way great plot and all

Author Response

They sent her back because in my mind that is what they did! LOL I really have no better reason then that. 

Thanks for the R/R!

I like the story so far, I just wanted to give you a couple of corrections should you decide to go back and edit:
-in the summary and near the beginning you use the word "threw" instead of through
-near the end of the chapter you describe Sirius and mean to say definitely instead of the word that you put in.

Author Response

lol thanks I love when people actually point out my errors instead of saying 'oh ya... you messed up'. LOL 

Thanks for the R/R!

wow. u r talented. lucky . . .

Author Response

thanks love!

Thanks for the R/R!

Interesting...this has a much different air than your other ones, but I like it just the same!  It's great!  I love reading your work! 
Off I go to the next chapter! 


10/10

Author Response

Thanks! I guess because this is one of the older ones.... Glad you like it dear!

''Since this morning.'' Came her petite reply. *Laughs* It's awesome!! 1O/1O

~Sirius

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thanks! i love that 2!

have to say that there is great canon evidence that remus did look old beyond his years. obviously being a werewolf doesnt help with the premature aging. also i dont like the whole thing where she can 'hear' he wolf within him, fine for herself because it would be like a new facet of her personality but people writing about werewolves often have the wolf thing being heard outside of the person and i just dont like it, but apart from that this is a good start

Author Response

Well it's like his voice, she can hear it like that. I don't know, lol I just thought it sounded good and It was writen like...months ago lol. Well thanks for reading.

nice opening and WOW how did he pick up she was a werewolf??

Author Response

Takes one to know one ;) Besides don't you think he'd be able to sense it? lol

Angieliz that was brilliant!

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Thank u! I

Cool

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lol thanks

interesting yet excellent start. off to chap 2...

Author Response

lol yay! glad your reading buddy! ha ha

Very fast paced for the first chapter but very interesting! I  really like it!

X's nd O's

The Damsel

Author Response

lol I know the first chappie is fast but its more like a prologe because thats not where the story takes place lol enjoy! thanks for the review!

Hey! It's finally up! It's so great... I'm so excited for all the other readers who want to read this cause it is a great story, believe me! LoL! Anyway, hope you update soon, and hopefully get a banner, and in your summary, make sure my penname is Lions_Rule8065 (capitals were missing) and at the top, it has a 9 in it. Just thought I'd let you now... hurry up plz... luv ya hun! :)

Author Response

The 2nd chappie is in limbo....Stupid wait! lol Well thanks M'dear for editing! I'm waiting till you send back the 7th chappie B4 I give you the 8th......Which I havn't finished yet lol ha ha well Thanks for the review, luv ya bunches!

I am totally loving this!  Please update soon!

Author Response

Ohh if you love the first chappie, you'll love the 2nd even more!

Cool story. Update soon.

Author Response

I will! :D

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