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Chapter: Aftermath | Story: Will You Have Me?

ooh cliffy

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Ok...well i love it sooo keep it up

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that was really good

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Nice chapter.  I really like how you don't drag on and on with quidditch training like some writers do...it isn't bland, but you didn't skip the important stuff.

The only thing is..."  â€˜How was training,â€™ asked Amanda as Sirius sat down next to her  "  Isn't Amanda on the team??  Ah, well, great chapter, once again.  (I hope the Potters are safe--although i have a sneaking suspicion...)

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Very good chappy! I hope James' parents are alright. I see there's another chappy so I'll go ahead and read it! Kiss Kiss ;)

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Coolies! Enjoy! Sorry it took so long to review... been busy!</i></font>

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Great chapter! Too bad Malfoy doesn't die soon, the git. Dumbledore is so nice, I liked â€˜Miss me already?â€™ Haha. Loved the game! Update soon!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks Di - I'm glad you like it so much... I'd love to kill Malfoy off too - but parts of me like him... generally the evil sadistic parts...</i></font>

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Wow, ur story is great. Most of the stories i have read that are this type are not that great but this is one of my favorites. i even have it on my fav. stories...haha...but im not gonna pressure u 2 update because i have my own and know how it is...just keep up the good work!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks so much BP - Hopefully there will be an update tonight, then one chapter more! I'm glad you liked this so much, thanks!</i></font>

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It didn't really seem stunted. Why didn't you put in what Peter wants to be when he gets older?????? I want to know. Of course Gryffindor had to win the game, so that was one thing I didn't worry about, but I do want to know about James's parents...Oh, why couldn't Remus or Lily just whistle more than once when they saw Dumbledore after whistling about Malfoy? It's not like Dumbledore doesn't know about the cloak.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Yes - but Dumbledore also knows that others shouldn't be out of bed at that time. We'll find out about Peter later - he obviously wasn't there when they were discussing futures. Thanks for your reviews.</i></font>

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another good chapter... cant wait for the big finale.  good job and update soon

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks - Finale coming sooner then Aftermath did. </i></font>

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Fantastic chapter! They won! Oh no, two chapters left...then a cliffhanger! When you finish this one, how long will it take for the other to come out? I was just wondering because I really want to read it!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> It won't take too long to get to the next one... I'll have it up within about 1 or 2 weeks. Glad your loving this!</i></font>

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