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ROTFLMAO!  That was so funny!  Although I don't think Ron would be so bold as to just jump on Hermione and kiss her--he may surprise me someday, though, LOL.  And poor Colin, but what a power for any girl to possess! BTW, JKR said in a recent chat that Ron's middle name is "Bilious"."Bilious".  Poor kid...Thanks for the laugh!

<i>Author's Response: I took a stab in the dark at his middle name.  I'm glad you liked it!</i>

<i>Author's Response: I took a stab in the dark at his middle name.  I'm glad you liked it!</i>

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Umm...how did Harry get into the girl's dormitory?  Remember, the stairs turn into a slide if a boy goes up them.  Book 5.  On a more positive note, I'm glad you started fixing the typos and spelling errors.

<i>Author's Response: haha i was thinking about that, i couldn't remember if that really happened in the book or if i just read it in some1's fan fic! haha i guess it really was in the book tho! o well......my mistake!</i>

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Bloody well-written story, iDOhavealife.  Why, thank you, iDOhavealife, how nice of you to say that.  No problem...No, I haven't lost my mind...I just wanted to see if I could leave myself a review, LOL.

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This story has incredible potential.  You need to describe things more rather than just say something happened.  For instance, when Ron kissed Hermione, you could say that Hermione noticed that Ron had gotten quiet, she could hear him shifting in his chair uncomfortably (he's nervous), then she felt his breath against her face and then he kissed her, a quick peck, before he hurried out of the infirmary.  Again, this has great potential, and it's a great idea (Hermione's POV while petrified); just slow down a little.  :-)

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I just revamped that chapter a little. I hope you like it.</i></font>

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