i like how you turned a line from the books into a whole story...very clever!
The way you described the quidditch match was just like jkr would and I think you had Olivers character so perfect. I really liked Charlie too he was fun and reckless and I definitely think he would have gone into working with dragons in such an impulsive manner. Also I loved the line about de-quidditching, it made me laugh :p
I liked the first chapter of your other Drarry story so I thought I would read this one too. I like the tension you write between Draco and Harry. It makes it seem very real that they would love and hate each other at the same time.
Author's Response: thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it!