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I am so excited that you reposted this story. I was reading it when you first had posted and I was hooked can wait and see what happens for the point you had left off the first time (NO SPOILERS). I hope you post soon and I can wait to see what is going to happen in the Beltane. I think you write very well and I also hope you post some of the other stories you had on the other profile cause they were really good.

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I really love this chapter. I like to see the family interaction between the Malfoy family. I also like to see Luna with someone other than Neville. I would not have ever thought Luna and Blaise to be together but so far it works. I am really liking Draco and Hermione together and the respect that Draco is showing her by not pushing to things she does not want to do. I hope you post a new chapter soon I can not wait to see how everyone will react to Hermione and Draco together. Especially Ron's reaction to everything.

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Thank you for reviewing this chapter. It's been a while and I didn't know how people would react to it, but after this I hope I continue to get more like this. Yes, I know I can't stop seeing Luna and Neville together. I really hope you continue reading because I'll be updating soon.

I am not a big fan of Hermione and George stories but this story have changed my mind. I read AWL after I found this story I really like but it left me with a lot of questions. Like do they ever ask each why they thought the other did not write in the book or do see what the other wrote? Why did the books not work? I like the Hermione ended up at the joke shop after she got in small fight with Ron. You can see she still cares or loves George.

I like seeing a different Hermione, she isn't as strong as in other stories. It show that she suffered a lot during the war and may even have PTSD from what she lived. As for George its something I haven't but I can understand him being broken after loosing his twin, the one person who was literally his other have. His actions are something would expect from someone who lost some so close to them.
 
Please update soon hope some of the questions are answered.

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Really like this chapter i can't wait to see what happens in the story. One think i would like to point out is you should try and put breaks or somethimg when your going from one scene to another so that if doesn't  run together and get confusing, other than that i love the story.

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I really hope you liked this chapter. Originally it did have breaks, but for some weird reason by laptop is glitching so you it doesn't allow it at this moment. 

-Mrs. JMal

I totally knew that the prophecy was taking about Rose and Scorpius. I love that Scorpius stood up to Ron. I can't wait until you post your next chapter.

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Hi there!

Thanks so much for the review!  When I first wrote the story, I wasn't sure how obvious it would be that Scorpius is the father... but I'm glad you're enjoying it! &hearts; 

I'm working on the next section now!

Beth

Totally love the last three chapters that you added. I didn't see Iris faking her own dead just to not marry Draco coming, but I did like that Draco wanted to date Hermione before he knew she was alive. I like that now Hermione is helping Draco heal. Can't wait until the next chapter, I want to see how Ron will react to Hermione and Draco dating. Totally love your story.

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Thank you! :) Next chapter is already on queue :)

I love your story. I can not wait until you post more. I like how you made Darco a healer, most of the time he is protruded as a business man. I really like that. Please post something soon.

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Or an Auror - I think he'd do well as a Healer :) Thank you for reading my story, next chapter is already on queue.  :)

I am loving the fluffy. I can wait to see how Harry will react to know that Rose is pregnant and how this is going to affect the prophecy. I love you story it is really well written.

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Hi there!

Thanks so much for the kind words.  Next chapter is up - and there are some reactions...

I can't tell you how excited I was to see this review!

Thanks again!

&hearts; Beth

I love your story. I started reading this yesterday and could not stop reading until I got to your latest chapter. I can wait until your next chapter, I wnat see how the Weasley react to Rose being pregnant.

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Hey there!

Thanks for the review!  I can't believe you read it in two days - that is amazing.  The next chapter is up now!

Thanks again!

&hearts; Beth

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