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This is very good and I'm really enjoying it! I like the ways the characters are introduced. The things that threw me was Charlie being at Hogwarts with the Maurauders - he's only two years older than Percy! But I like it anyway because I love Charlie. Anyway back to first impression, it was very cleverly done by how each was brought up. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> You have the wrong Charlie.  Charlie Weasley, brother to Ron, wouldn't have been at Hogwarts during the Marauder years.  However, we know that Arthur Weasley has three brothers.  Taking a guess he might have named one of the boys for one of his brothers, and because I do like Charlie Weasley the younger, I used that name for this youngest brother of Arthur's.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope this helps.</i></font>

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Wow, this is definately your best work and I'm glad you've decided to continue again! Your style is beautiful and the characters are wonderfully formed and very believable. Can't wait for chapter 3! 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you so much for two things! Firstly for your wonderful review; I wasn't sure if the characterisation, so it's great to known your liked it - and secondly for keeping on at me to get chapter 2 out! If it wasn't for you, I would have never got round to it! *hugs*</i></font>

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Wow very Obi-Wan Kenobi ey? Lol, I enjoyed the beginning and like Sirius's little intrusion into Harrys dreams.

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An Aurora ey? Whats that? Oooh Auror ;-) sorry can't refuse a tease. Well there I was waiting patiently for the next chapter of Darkness Falls and I decided to come over to see what all the fuss was about. So here I am seeing whats going on. Well I like it very much, good kinda almost childish hate for Draco cos of him humiliating her in first year. Bet I can't guess what happens :P

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> lol, Hey, thanks for coming over to read! Good news for you, I've started on Darkness Falls 2 and it should be out soon. lol, I bet you can; but their are a few twisty twists along the way!</i></font>

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There were pickled slugs (â€œTaste great in stew!â€), potatoes that screamed when they were over-cooked, and a Three-Second-Feast, which did exactly as the name implied. - fantastic, very nice and the magazines are also very funny. Great chapter.

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Whats with the tea drinking obsessions? Lol!!! Its so funny, we do drink coffee as well y'know. *wishes there was a laughing emoticon to insert here.* Yay still that little Spew/ S.P.E.W. thing nice touch. Awh its so sad, I love this tory so much! ITs fantastic!

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Oh god that was Snape wasn't it. Oh good it was Wormtail. (sorry I kinda review as I go along.) Hehe Todd... Godrics Hollow clever idea but Lily didn't spill any blood there she was attacked by Avada Kedavra... spose she still died there. Yay love it!

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*squeal!* Wow fantastic so far, I love the Patels and their little remarks over Ron and the link back to the fourth year. Nice one!

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Flip you american and your obsession with dragging all the characters out there. Lol - I'm joking, I'm just being a possessive brit cos we don't really have a lot to be possessive about lol but honestly, its very good so far, everything is very canon and I like the add in of Salem. On to the next chapter.

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Omg this is so wierd, I read the summary and then the prologue and I had this exact idea for a story. So am interested in reading yours except I didn't have him go to the US haha - good start.

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Way to go vellagirl! Awesome story, fantastic, love it mucho... even if you did kill charlie *mutter* lol jokes. Let me know if you want a beta - quidditchkid x

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks so much, you were a GREAT  reviewer and It means alot to get good feedback!  Let me know when you are done with school and I'll send you over my screenplay.  thanks again.  </i></font>

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I love Bellatrix and Voldie in this they're so patronsing and actually quite witty. Great dialogue between H and V, as usual - you generally do have very good conversation between your characters.Awh Ron hes so funny, Hermione and Harry all ready with the charm and Rons like 'the what?'What is the translation of the latin... it is latin right, I got something, courage, amicable, mother, circle winds - dude you don't do latin do you lol, your grammars appalling.Sacre Bleu, what is happening! Its all very scary :D

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I'm glad you like them.   They are the best baddies!!!  I believe the translation is something like courage, love, and friendship bring forth the firery circle...  something like that.  No, I have no background in Latin, I just typed what I wanted to say into a online translator and it spit out what I have in the story.  Glad you like it!</i></font>

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Dude this boys psycho, lets go out yelling the names of another pyscho whos out ot kill everyone. Woo! Genius plan, lol, the thrill is building up, its weally weally scary. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Well, Harry is reckless!  and angry!  </i></font>

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*sobs away* Thats so sad, awh man, if Jk even dares I will hunt her down... and tear her spleen and wear it for a hat. I might do that to you first... hmm :P

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> YOu are a bit scary you know that?  LOL.  I can't see all of the Weasleys making it through the war....  I fear one or more might die.   *Sob*</i></font>

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AAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *sob*Poor harry, clever use of the guilt thing again.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I'm soooo sorry!  </i></font>

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Awh no, scene in cafe! VELLAGIRL! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO CHARLIE! I'LL KILLA YOOOOU. ok over that lol, but omg nooooo! So good so caught up argh!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> LOL!  don't hurt me!</i></font>

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*warningly* Veeeeeelllaaaaaagiiiirrrrllll!

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Lol! Molly makes it sound like they're getting married... nice touch. I love Charlie, he's great - sorry random comment. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Now that you said that I feel very bad.....i'm sorry ahead of time.  </i></font>

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Yay!ness! Finally... honestly what took you so long... joking! perfect timing, I love Rons, 'You didnâ€™t just kiss me because youâ€™re feeling overly emotional and vulnerable did you?' very funny. Reminded me of something Chandler would say. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> LOL, Hermione and ron are very bull-headed.  At least Ron is a gentlemen, he was just making sure he wasn't taking advantage of her.  It is something Chandler would say! LOL!</i></font>

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Awh bless Harry and his ignorance of spin the bottle! dude as much as I love ya and all that was a rubbish quidditch description - lol! Sorry, anyway great as ususal.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> LOL!!!  I know!!! I knew that when I wrote it!!!  I just couldn't do it at the moment and I never felt motivated to go back and do it!  </i></font>

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Hehe, very funny, Ron dressing up as Harry. I like the teetering of the R/Hr relationship and the fact you've kept it so real with Hermione and Ron feeling that the War is priority. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I didn't want to jump into a relationship right away,  It's going to take awhile for those two to get it together.  They don't know what they want.  </i></font>

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Ah, I like the way the trio (and us) don't find out the catch of the circulus flabra... could be interesting.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> HeHe, you'll see.  </i></font>

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Lol, it was the boyfriend flirting with other girls lecture she gave to Ron and Hermione and thats exactly what Sirius would have been like.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> YOu are so right, I can totally see that,  I wish I had before.  </i></font>

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Ok, maybe just me but Jones must have been Sirius' girlfriend! It just seems to fit... well I'll have to wait to find out. Awh, damn it Snape! 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> LOL!!! That would be great!  I didn't even think of that!!!!!!  they would have been great for each other!!!  maybe I should re-do this fic...</i></font>

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Lol, oh Ron bless him and his stomach. Well, I like Hestia Jones, she seems cool. Yay the DA is up again...

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> LOL, gotta love ron!  I really like Hestia Jones too.  They need to have a cool female DA teacher.  Unbridge was horrid!</i></font>

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