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I really like this story and your style of writing, specifically because you're just a beginner. I liked the little internal cliff-hanger to keep us interested! Nicely done.
I think Lucius was slightly out of character when you wrote of his reaction. I think that he would've been more disappointed that his only son had turned out to be gay which was most probably looked down upon in pureblood society. Also I think he would've reacted a lot stronger to the fact that it was Harry he was gay with, I mean he's the guy they're trying to kill!
One last thing, you sometimes spell father with an extra 'r' so it becomes 'farther' but other than that the spelling is practically immaculate.
All in all, it was a very nice piece and I can't wait to read chapter 7!
Em x

Author Response

Thank you very much :) Ok, i agree with the more disappointed and the whole pure blood side of things i shall take that on board (maybe re-write it, I'm not sure yet) With his son dating Harry i don't think it is a big thing it's only a big thing because he is worried for his sons safety and how the Voldemort might try to use him. I will go through and sort the whole father/farther thing out. My proof reader didn't read through it before i posted it so i shall sort that out :) Chapter 7 is taking me ages because i just can't seem to get it right! I can't transfer what's in my head on to paper, But i promise it will be up soon!

Oh my, this was beautifully written. I couldn't stop crying when Stella was killed! You're very talented :)

Author Response

justkeepswimming,

Oh, hello dear and welcome to my story!  Thank you so much on your compliment to me as a writer.  Awe, you cried? *sends tissue*

This story is quite sad, but I hope you keep reading.  It really is a look into Draco's deepest thoughts during the war (and Hermione's as well).  This is a true Dramione romance for those that love them together. 

I do hope you continue... 
Thank you for finding my story and taking a chance on it!

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper

I read this ages ago, for the first time and I've jut finished it a second. Gah, it just doesn't get old! This isn't one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, this is one of the best stories - that's supposed to be in italics, gosh don't you just hate that it doesn't let you use italics? bummer - I've ever read. It's fantastic, oh my word. Words could never explain, I mean I'm on the verge of tears this story is so good. Ah, I love you for writing this. This review will probably go unnoticed but I'll still say if you ever decide to publish your work, you're going to be bloody amazing. Freaking 11/10

Author Response

No. Why would you do that? Why?!
Anyways, great chapter and personally I love Vicky, not sure why though...:')

Author Response

I love Vicky too! I think it's in her attitude for me. It's so different from Charlie's because she doesn't take rubbish from anyone. And yep, James is an idiot. Sorry!

Wow, this is going to turn into my new favourite. I love the idea behind your story, I hardly ever find ones that it's the girl who likes the boy and not the other way around but that might just be me. To be honest, Charlie really reminds me of myself most of the time and that's the main reason why I love her to bits. We're both pretty cool ;) Only kidding, I really love this so please update soon!

Author Response

Aw I'm so glad to hear that! And I'm sure you're just as cool as Charlie, probably more. She's too busy fawning over James or obsessing over her grades to worry about her image. Anyway thanks for the review. :)

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