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JAMES AND LILY! WAIT no... REMUS AND MARY! No, I dont think so maybe, DUMBLEDORE AND PETER! 
Haha, no I am DEFINETLY am rooting for a little kayla Sirius action. No not like that, god.

that is really it bye!

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I don't know. I'm liking the Dumbledore/Peter one. 

^_^ keep reading and you'll see a lot of action. No not that kind. Well...maybe :P. Thanks for the review. It made me laugh a lot!

Loved it! Keep going. I like the whole scene with Snape. I love Snape and all but, I just think he needs a better attitude when he was at Hogwarts! But of course that would ruin the story! So, I want to see some James Lily controversy, why? Because its really funny. Thats really it.

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I wish I could give Snape a better character. But as much as I love him, he was a prick in Hogwarts. :(

Thank you, and as for James and Lily, you'll have to just wait and see. XD

That is my favorite song in the world! I love Taylor Swift! Great song.Great story.

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Thank you!

This is my favorite song, I saw the title and I clicked on it no question! Great story, I think I will be adding it to my favorites...

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awwee thanks :) its one of my favorite songs too! :)

O my god! That is my new favorite song! I loved it! O gosh that was awesome.

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Wow! Oh my God I love reading reviews like this! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it :) 
Thanks for reviewing! 
xx

OMG! I want more! I really like this story its really original.

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Cliffie! Not cool that is just not cool. I'm waiting for another chapter! Jessica reminds me of my best friend Leslie. She LOVES our other friend Matt. They kissed in truth or dare a few months a go. Lets just say its been awkward...
Anyways love the writing love the details love the dialoge love the plot! Keep going!

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Hahah, it happens. Kisses that are unexpected are great... in fan fiction. lol. its kinda hard to do the same in real life, depending on the situation. Thank you so much for your support, and your review!

I loved it! Funny thing is my friend loves that quote because there is this super hot guy at our school and she really liked him and one day he asked her out. She was ecstatic, but he broke it off and asked me out! Apparently he was trying to make me jealous. I turned him down and he asked my friend out again. Its sad really :(

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That's so sad! That guy should figure out his priorities. I hate guys like that. I was actually in your friend's situation a couple of months ago. Thanks for reviewing though...I'm glad you liked it :)

I loved the story! Keep up the good work! Besy take on the James and Lily romance I have read in a long time...

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Oh my gosh thanks!! =D You have no idea how happy that's made me!! Thank you sooo much!! =D

I love it! Like allways I just wish James would dump Sunny because I really dont like her (I guess im not supposed too) and I wish Lily would Kiss James or something and then Sunny would walk in. Yeah except KARMA! So somethings going to happen to lily something bad, im not sure what but it will be mortifying.

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hahaahaha. The Karma point of the chapter was actually more on the karma sutra thing. haha, either way you are not supposed to like Sunny. But who knows she may end up being the break out character. I don't know it'd be a good plot twist huh? Either way, I can't just do that! I can't just end it yet. I've got so much more to write here. It can't end yet!! I'm not ready!!! haha. 

thanks for the review lovely. 
xoxo
natalie.

This is my favorite fanfction by far! I really love it keep going and I just have to say I hope Mary could make Sirius jealous. I really want that but I can imagine millions of different ways this story could go.

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Thank you SOO much! :D THis really means a lot :D

I just read your story today, and I have to say it was incredible! I cried 3 times! I want to say that I loved the dialoge between characters. I was really sad when there wasnt any of that in the last few chapters. 
Anyways more sad then any other fanfic. Because the girl dies and thats it, but yours was different and I liked that.

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Thank you!

That was really good! I hope you keep writing! I would give you a suggestion on the story but I have the creatitvity level of a pebble. It was really good though!

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she should say Sebastion is Remus. 
Thats 10 times less embarissing

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She should say that. We'll see. Thanks for reviewing!

loveee it really good

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Thank you :D

really good, I think Lily has a very interesting point of view on the marauders, in harry potter. Its like she really likes them but she cant admit it, Its like that in all of the stories. You really caught the essence of it though

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goood! I really loved it!

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Thank you so much :)

I cried! really hard! The little slut hermione!

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i agree with u but Harry was to blame too, don't u think? thanks 4 reviewing!!!^_^

Harry and Ginny

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