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Hey. I really like this story so far. I mean I don't like the fact that Sirius is such a douche bag, but I do like how you make it really clear that it's due to some serious emotional baggage. I hope you explain what that baggage is soon, and the SOB owns up to what he did. It takes two people to have sex, my god! Lol.

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Thank you. Well, boys have been known to be ridiculous. Will update really soon :)

I am awe struck to silence... post another chapter quick PUHLEASE

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> wow, i guess being 'awestruck to silence' is a good thing.. so i am gonna go with that pretense! lol, my next chapter is almost done (i must say though.. no dirty dancing this time, mostly squabbling lol) .. thanks so much for your review (it means a lot) and keep checking back on the story! </i></font>

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wow... please update... i love this story so much!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks Elisha! I will very soon!</i></font>

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Haha I love this story... so UPDATE very quickly... please... this is called begging... lol usually it works

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Oooh, begging from *you* might work! I keep hearing your name everywhere on the forums! Hehe, I'll have to read your fics sometime! And I'm on summer vacation now, so I SHOULD *coughcoughhackhack* be updating soon!</i></font>

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hahahaha THANK GOD someone finally told them off... jesus... I hope Harry turns good again but then again the fact that he's evil really does give an incredible twist to the story... and was Draco hitting on Hermione? ahhhhhhhhh what could come of THAT?!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> so many questions! and they can all be answered if you keep reading! muhaha, yes I know I'm evil! Thanks Elisha!</i></font>

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if you dont update i will hunt you down and hold a gun to your head until you finish writing the next chapter... but that's not a threat, no, it's INSPIRATION. hehe

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whoa... incredible story so far

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dun dun dun... YOU CANT DO THAT TO US!! lol i want to know what happens next... dont leave me hanging!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Oh, but I can... And you'll see what happens next eventually. Thanks for the review. =)</i></font>

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AHHHHHHHHH!!!! omg.... UPDATE NOW!!! omg i love this story... omg... omg... omg... omg... LOL obviously you're a a great writer!!! INCREDIBLE!! AWESOME!! wow...

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I SPENT THE LAST FEW HOURS READING THIS SERIES AND YOU LEAVE IT OFF AT THE MOST DIRE TURNING POINT EVER?! ARGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Well I'm glad you read it Elisha! I'm posting the next chap in a few minutes!! Sorry to keep you waiting!</i></font>

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NOOOOO DON'T END HERE!!!!!

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You need... to update... so soon... oh please... i'm addicted and now i'm on withdrawal... DOESNT FEEL GOOD!!

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This story is so incredible that the only word i can ever say to express my feelings towards it is... UPDATE

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I would leave an incredibly long review endlessly praising your incredible talents at writing, but i fear that there aren't words that can describe how... well... kickass this story is, lol. Seriously... wow... i'm literally in shock. I love this story so much I'm at the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens next!!! Agh, now i won't be able to stop thinking about this story... I'll just be lost in thoughts at what is going to happen next!!! signed your newest and most faithful reader~ Elisha

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> *blushes* I'm not sure I deserve such nice words after that long wait between updating I just did.. I feel like a bitch now.. To be completely honest this review is what made me post chapter 5 today, it was so freaking wonderful that I just had to update. This review has left me grinning and all that good stuff, so yes, thanks a bunch for the review.</i></font>

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I so hope that you continue this story!! I can relate to it so well!! I'm a giant... my nicknames have been the Rainbow Ogre and the Jolly Green Giant. I don't have a stuttering problem but i have problems with strangers... i like completely shut down. I can't believe how well i can relate to the character... please continue!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Lol... I will! Two chapters up for your reading pleasure (: Rainbow Ogre? Haha. Kinda reminds me of breakfast cereals o_o</i></font>

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Omg wow. You can't just leave me hanging like this!! This story is absolutely incredibly!! You describe Malfoy's opinions of Ron and Harry PERFECTLY!! This whole thing with him and Hermione is unbelievable, but you make it seem so real! You got skill, girl!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> *blush* I'm glad that you liked it.  I'm doing my best...</i></font>

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Lol omg those people are so evil. They need to leave Oliver and Hermione alone!!! Tears... i'll be waiting for an update UNTIL you do just that!!!. Oh but what will happen to Harry? This story is bloody brilliant. Keep writing, please!!

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Oh no you did not just say that Ron is being taken out of school. if that happens.... i dont know if i'll ever EVER read this story again!! After you finish it, of course...

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I did just say that. He can't go unpunished for what he's done. Sorry if that's a disappointment.</i></font>

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Hey no problem. And my advice isn't professional or anything, lol. But i'll like reread the chapters carefully and tell you precisely what's too much when i email you. Goodnight and happy new year!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Good, thanx. I'll be waiting for the email. Happy new year to you too!</i></font>

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Umm you should do a weird name like Caramella (which means sweet) or Amora (which means love) and then the other should be like a common name like Emily or Ashley or Laura or something. Also i do recommend you write about Hermione at Vicky's cause it woudl be great to know about how she feels about him and ron's chacnes with her and all sorts of stuff. im misspelling a lot, lol. Anyways you might have gone too deep into detail for the first two chapters cause you dont want to make the readers lose interest!! You were like right on the line of too much and not enough. Besides that it was an incredible story and i cant wait for an update

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanx for the names, I'll use them, mark my words! As for adding too much detail for the first two chapters, call me stupid but I would really like it if you'd go further and tell me exactly where I should remedize (sp?). And as for Hermione's Christmas dinner at Krum's, I shall consider that. Because even though nothing like the plot summary's happened yet, it's coming up soon and it's going to take up much of the storyline. But I could have it in there anyways, if I'm in the mood for some juicy jeopardy between two boys, one internationally famous and one her best friend. thanx for the suggestions Elisha, you give me tons of experienced advice from the art of literature. lol i'll try to update by tomorrow, but I'm not betting my life on it! Check it out anyways. bye g2g sleeeeep</i></font>

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That was great writing. The only thing that i would recommend is spacing out the conversations a bit more. Besides that i really wanna know what's going to happen next with Hermione and "Vicky" and what's going to happen to Ron and Hermione. Oo la la!! I can't wait!!! great job. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank u so much for the suggestions, Elisha it made me realize indeed the reason why I didn't really like what I wrote. But I'm not exatly the most confident person in the world in writing about the background and other matters other than conversation. Just dropping you a hint, Hermione IS indeed going over to 'Vicky' for Christmas dinner, though I don't think I'm going to write about it. The main plot is about Harry and Ron getting whizzed into the human world and meeting a pair of muggle girls. Surprisingly enough, I don't have a name for them, so if you can drop me a few ideas! lol </i></font>

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Wow i'm so glad you updated. I hope you update real soon. This is a great story. This is an INCREDIBLE story

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Why thank you. I know it's been a while, I swear I won't make you wait again for such a long period.
Love, Deborah</i></font>

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Lol omg what a... lol... yea that's a great ending

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Omg he's going to kill Draco

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> this is possible...</i></font>

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Wow, i dont think anyone has ever made an evil Hermione before. You've done it perfectly though! I can't wait to find out what happens next, especially in Draco and Hermione's relationship since their last... encounter

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