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Good story line. A little cheesey, but super-cute.
Keep 'em coming! (:

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Definitely made me smile. It was a cute story; made me laugh. I pretty much loved it! Keep up the good work! (:

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aw thanks!  and thanks for this lovely review!

cute story, I positively loved the ending. I can't help but think that Harry was a little out of character though.  Harry's tough, not quite as sensitive as you portrayed him.  But once again, I loved the ending with Teddy and you're a great writer.  Just a few grammatical errors, but still great.

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what a sweet little story... could be longer, though.

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Thak you allot! You reveiw made me smile! I'm glade you took the time to reveiw!

this is a sad, sad, angsty, tragically depressing yet somehow happily ending story. i congratulate you.

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Thank you!! I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

well written story, but i don't really think it's very realistic. keep writing!

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LOL

Thank you :)

great story. good ending, but i also wish you would have shown more of the actual memorial service as opposed to just the thoughts of the people attending. still, a good story.

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why thank you!  I wanted to avoid action and stay in their heads. but I'm glad you liked it.

i cannot believe you did a song fic to this song. that is so awesome. how creative! it's funny the songs you can think of that fit with harry potter, huh? thnx for the great story. may the Lord be with you and have a great day.

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How did you get on to HPFF on April fools? Every time I tried, it was Twilight Sauce or something strange like that. I'm glad you like the story.

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