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That was really good! Please update again soon!!

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Thank you! I will do my best to serve an update ASAP!
~Greta

it was great! and im pretty sure its chapter 20 and not 21. but I do hope you keep writing, and soon!

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o :) Great catch! Thanks love :)

I'm writing, I'm writing, I SWEAR! haha. The next chapter is maybe a 5th done :) 

I'll update soon, and thanks soo much for reviewing!

~Greta

Awww! that was so great! WOW! I LOVED IT!
Best chapter yet, definitely!
But I do wish it were a little longer. thanks!
love your stuff!
-Mary

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Aw, glad you did :) Best chapter? REALLY? lol. I wish it was longer too, but I can update faster when it's shorter? :) 

Thanks so much, Mary, for reading! I really apprecaite your time!

~Greta

Oh i am loving how you are going along with the plot.
I do think the ending conversation was a little silly, but I dont mind :D
I'm very interested in seeing if or how you might pull Hermionie and Draco closer. Your story is simply enticing and I look forward to many (right? many!)more chapters!
-Mary

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Why, thank you, dear : ) 
The conversation was silly, but oh well. I`m going to have a look at it later, and see what I can do to make it better : ) 
And of course, maby more chapters. There might be 50 in all, maybe 40. We`ll see. It`ll end when it ends, but it will definitely end. lol. So no worries there. 

Thanks for RRing, love : ) I appreciate it

~Greta

That was great! Its really interesting about Susan and Thaddius. I really want to learn more about Draco's friend. Theadore or whatever.
Thanks for the great chapter!!!

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Thanks :) You will, next chapter :P Have fun!
~Greta

wow! this one is great

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this is sooo good so far!

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wow!
i really love your story so far.
please please please update some more,
it is sooo great!
thanks!

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Thanks so much! :) 

I'm working on an update right now!

~G

OMFG!
What the heck!
They both died for nothing!
THat was a very good little short story.
I applaud you :D
-MARY

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Thank you Mary ^_^

i liked it. but the constant changing of perspectives annoyed me a little bit. I think it might have been better if you stuck with one perspective for a little bit longer. thats just me though.
good one!
-mary

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I know, it's really rude of me to switch back and forth so fast... but i wanted to update everyone on the characters... and i guess I got a little sloppy *smiles sheepishly* sorry :)

But anyway, i'll do better with the next chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Greta

ahh! that was so great!
the only thing that bothered me was the typos.
There were three: non instead of noon, and two others i cant quite remember. great chapter though!
I love the ending... I can't wait for more :D

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thanks for the review :) 
I'm sorry about the typos, but I think I've updated with the betaed version since so they should be gone :D
I'll try update soon ;)

hey! you HAVE to finish! I am enthralled with your story! please finish!
it is lovely, by the way, the way you portray hermionie and draco. They both seem so, huh, well, realistic. You know, the way they are portrayed in the books. KEEP ON WRITING PLEASE!

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It was good. Just a little sappy. I didn't really understand the beginning or what was going on there. It was an ok story, I find it unrealistic though.

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Thank you for taking the time to review. I'm sorry it wasn't connectable for you.

ooohhh! that was very well written! I can not wait for you to write/publish the new chapter. I'm covered in goosebumps from the excitement! Please keep on writing!

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thank you! I'll try get the next one up soon :)

omg wat is the title?!?!? you HAVE to add it ! omg i am so sucked into this game. WHAT IS THE TITLE?
a really great chapter! 
good job, keep writing, please!

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dont get too excited..i really dont want to dissapoint...goodness..no pressure, yes? lol. thanks, and i will keep writing :)

well. i do want to hear more, its just the spelling and grammatical mistakes bother me a little. Keep trying though!

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i fixed the mistakes...
                               lala

Woah. You hate Malfoy, but at the same time, you just have to love him! You really captured his character!!! Please keep writing, I know you thought this chapter was boring, but it was my favorite so far. I'm practically in love with Malfoy already! Keep on writing!

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Thanks! Yes, he is definatley one of those love/hate characters! When I'm writing 'him' I tend to stray from his character and he seems sort of OOC-ish so I'm veryy glad he seems well depicted!

And thank you SO much for reviewing; recieving such wonderful feeback is really inspiring and makes me happy =D Thankss!

Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x

Wow. Please please please please write longer chapters. This was great, but I want so much more!

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Thanks! They will get longer - I promise!! The chapter I'm currently writing (chapter 7 or 8 I think....) is aroung 5000 words and counting!

Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x

Wow again! Your writing is getting even better!

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Thanks! 

Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x

OMG that was soo good! My friend kept texting me while I was reading and it was making me so mad because I kept getting interrupted! That was excellent! LOL! Keep it up!

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Thanks! Haha - I know the feeling. My phone is forever bussing when I'm in the middle of writing and then I completey lose the flow of what I was doing in the first place! I'm sincerely glad you still enjoyed it though =D

Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x

hmm. you were right, it was REALLY short. But it certainly facinated me. I will definatly keep reading!!

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Thanks! Yes, a very short first chapter and the next few are somewhat similar but they do get longer - eventually anyway :P

Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x

hmph. you stopped there. that is sad. I loved the story. I wished you would have completed it more thoroughly. The only reason i gave it a 9 out of 10 was because of the many spelling errors. Otherwise, it was very good!

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AARGH!!! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US!

YOU BETTER FINISH IT!

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Apologies to all, but this site is too frustrating with the waiting and restrictions for chapter posting so the rest of the story will be solely updated on fanfiction (dot) net. The author's name to look for is still Snape's bikini. No underscores. Thanks for the love and support!

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