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Review:Rickster says:
Ur fanfic called Perfect was a good start but it seemed like more of an outline than an acuall story maybe u should rewrite it start slower and make it more than one chapter because this story was to fast to grasp and u got in to the point to fst slow down a bit

Author's Response:`s a ONE-shot. Which means it`s suppose to be short!!!! Doi!!!!!! I know it isn`t that great I mean the plot isn`t very developed but it`s suppose to be that way!!!! This was just a quick little fluffy story I wrote when I was bored! My other storys are MUCH better. I am thinking about re-writing this though so I`ll keep your suggestions in mind. But no I won`t make it more than one chapter. Anyway.........Thanks for the review!!!! Sorry you didn`t like it!!!!!!!! I`ll use this flame to keep me warm tonight!!!!!!! = P

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