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Review:Midnight spark says:
I know I'm like totally late, so I'm really really sorry about that! :(

Another great chapter, well done Sophie! I think you've captured the different emotions in this chapter very well, it's like, really cool. Beatrice seems to be very friendly and I have a feeling that she has a very vital role in this story, she and James.

And Molly is so caring! She lied for Lily, and that touched my heart. :)

I noticed some typos and things like that here and there, just minor ones. Too sleepy to find them now.

So I know that this is like super short after such a long wait, but I promise you, I'll make it up to you someday!

Love
Sana

Author's Response: Hi again!

I forgot all about this so honestly, don't worry about it being late.

Aww thank you! I was a bit worried at first but I'm glad it came off okay. Beatrice, I love writing her. She's definitely going to be vital to Lily through all of this, especially in later chapters when certain things come out. Since Lily isn't as close to James as she is with Al, they do become close again throughout the story.

Molly is my favourite is this, after Lily of course. She's by far different to how I've wrote her in other stories so I like the change! There's a reason she and Lily are best friends, and that's just one of the things which I loved writing when it came to that bit as weird as it sounds because they are so close that Molly didn't even need Lily to ask her to lie, she just did it.

Yeah probably, lol. A read over will probably sort it I think.

Thanks again Sana!

-Potterfan310


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