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Review:Midnight spark says:
Hey, it's me from the forums!
I know I was requested for chapter 1 but it was so nice that I read the three chapters! Lily and Aidan seems really realistic. I really want to know how they fell for each other. Maybe a flashback or something?

I had been trying to find a flow in the plot but failed to do so. It's just flawless, I guess. :)
My favorite line was 'Life is no picnic, I tell you' from chapter 2. Thank you for that chance to review!

Loved it,
~Alex

Author's Response: Hi,

Sorry it's taken so long to reply. Been busy/ill but I'm here now!

I love writing them because not only are they going to have to deal with everything, but they are best friends. Lily does explain briefly in chapter one about how it came about to their 'friends with benefits'.

Haha thanks.

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it :D

-Potterfan310


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