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Review:Infinityx says:
Who on earth is this girl? :o

Here for the BvB review battle, by the way.

Pippa's character is one of the most interesting I've come across. She just radiates a cunning aura and I am extremely intrigued about her and what's about to happen.

I found it a little weird that James and Mason crashed the wedding. They must really hate Peter for some reason, since they don't know Pippa and she can't be the reason for them doing so. I wonder what the story behind them is...

This chapter surely leaves behind a lot of questions. I like how you've brought in Allegra's character and the way she understands Pippa's tone and the undercurrents to it.

I felt this chapter to be a bit too fast paced though. Things just keep happening one after the other and there's no emphasis on the details of any single event. But the effect was strongly portrayed though. There was action and certain mysterious tone from the very beginning, so I can't wait to see what's coming up.

I hope there'll be a bit more background on all the characters that were introduced in this chapter for there are quite a few loose ends to what just happened. I'll definitely come back to read on and find out!

- Erin

Author's Response: Hello again! :D

Thank you! Such a HUGE compliment! :D I'm glad she's cunning! I wanted her to be witty and I'm glad that came across! :)

Hehe, you'll have to see... ;) They definitely don't like peter!

Thank you! I'm glad! It's meant to leave a lot of questions

Yeah, I understand. I will definitely go back and add more description :) Thank you! Lovely comment! Thanks again! :D

Hehe, definitely! There will definitely be more background! :D

-Curie :)

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