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Review:navyfail says:
Hi! I'm here from the review swap!

Oh, you start the story off with a wedding! Very interesting.

And Peter why, oh why, did you cheat on her? Pippa is an intriguing character. And she has a hot temper. I wonder why she agreed to marry Peter in the first place. Does this have to do with her job? She's moved from France to Britain for some reason too. I'm very curious, indeed.

Oh, James and Mason! I like them. They are very cheeky and boyish. But why did they find a need to crash the wedding other than making sure Pippa didn't marry a dishonest man, of course?

The end leaves an air of mystery. And I can already tell a plot is starting to brew. I really like how you introduced your characters and how they'll develop throughout will be compelling.

Great first chapter!! And good luck on future chapters!


p.s. My guess is that she is an undercover agent of some sort.

Author's Response: Hi!

Would it be too cliche to say that the idea came to me in my dreams? ;) It actually did.

Well, it doesn't play a big part in the story. But, yes, it is to do with her job. Just an ordinary transfer :) Nothing spectacular I'm afraid :/

Haha, because they don't like him of course! But I cant tell you why! I'm glad you like them! Mason is my favourite character! :D

Thank you! And of course, thank you for an amazing review and review swap! :D


PS- I wish it was that interesting! ;)

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