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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I reviewed chapter one some time ago; now I'm back for chapter two for the BvB Review Battle!

Wow, I really, really love this story so far. James and Mason, wedding crashing extraordinaires, burning toast in their flat, bahaha. It's cute that Mason's good at cooking--rather different, I think!

I'm glad that James has a good relationship with his family, rather than being moody!James who feels like he's in his father's shadow. From what Ginny says about Pippa, she seems REALLY snarky and mean for no reason except that she wants to ruin people. I can't wait to find out why she's like this, because right now, I love AND hate her at the same time!

Getting some of Pippa's background was nice. She and James are being friends now?! Uh oh, that could lead to trouble, especially since she's still making evil plans to write articles about people. :)

Great second chapter! Update soon!


Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad it wS interesting enough to come back :D

Thank u! That actually sounds awesome! The easy u described them! Way cooler than the story!

Thank u! Unwanted that to be different! To me, James never seemed like the bratty boy of the house, just cheeky, yet still sweet :) She sort of is :) But, to her, she's just doing her job. If u get what I mean... ;) thank u! That is completely the point! Pippa's meant to be hate-able and lovable :)

Haha, it does lead to trouble :) let's just say that their relationship isn't reallybsmooth... ;)

Thank u! I will try my best!


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