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Review:kenpo says:
Hiya, here for the BvB battle:)

This was awesome, but sad. I think Victoire was great. Her family and the traditions that they shared were obviously very important to her, and I think that was clear but not too obviously stated. It also makes sense that family would mean a lot to her. She's the oldest child of the oldest child... and she's the oldest cousin.

I don't know why, but for a second I thought Teddy had killed her.

...my bad.

That would've been an interesting direction to take things...

Dominique is so dramatic. She's such a younger sister. She does have a point, but it was clear that they didn't want to hurt her.

I liked that you had the flashback in there. It was nicer than if you'd narrated that section. It made the characters come alive a lot more.

Teddy and Victoire were so sweet together. They obviously cared for each other very much. I hope their relationship isn't hurt too much by Dom's reaction...

I already said that I liked the way you portrayed Dom... but really. It was good. So dramatic. I'd love to see Bill trying to calm her down.

This was a really cool, well written story. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Hi! Another lovely review! How sweet! :D

Thank u! I'm glad it does! I would hate for it to seem cliche and not necessary or believable!

Haha, that is actually a first! :D And yes, how interesting that would be! Ooh a plunny! ;)

Thank u! Thats all she's meant to be, dramatic. Not 'bad'! I'm glad u saw that side of her!

Nah, it wouldn't be! Teddy loves Vic too much for that! And vice versa!

Thank u! I'm glad! Your reviews are really awesome! :D

Thank u! I'm glad u did! :D

-Curie :)

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