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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello again Curie! Yay, I get to read more of your work! I'm here again for the 8th day of the 12 Days of Reviewing!

One thing I'd like to point out, in your chapter summary, Victoire's name was spelt wrong :) You can go fix that whenever though, Grace did an excellent job at betaing the piece.

This definitely was darker than the other prompt stories! I was not expecting this! Prompt four was definitely the hardest to write for because you couldn't alter the beginning in any way, and a whole whack of other people would have the same beginning. I think you threw in a very good twist of your into this, so great job!

Dom is so ew. I hated her. Characterization is definitely a strength for you because you wanted the reader to hate her, and I did, so your job there is done. She is just such a brat!

The flow of the story was great, which was nice to see because when people are switching POVs and going into flashbacks and stuff it's not always the smoothest but this was, so congrats on that.

Tedy is so cute, really. He seems so loving and him and Victoire make the cutest couple ever, and especially when he proposed!

Anyways, great one shot and I wish you luck in the duel!

Author's Response: Hi Nadia!! :D

Haha, yeah, I normally don't write dark, but this, I wanted to do instantly! The hardest thing for me is getting the voice right, so I was actually happy that the beginning was already tere :D

Thank you so so much! It' means a lot!! :D I can express in words how happy u made me! :D

Eep! More compliments!! Thank u thank u thank u!! :D you are way too nice to me!

Haha, I'm glad u think they're cute! Teddy is definitely my dream guy! :)

Thank u!! I'll fix up those typos soon :)

Thanks again for the super lovely review!! :D

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