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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the Eighth Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing, in which we must review Winter Writer's Duel stories. :)

Poor Victoire. Her siblings were her whole world, and to have one of them leave her must have been heartbreaking--no, it WAS heartbreaking. I love that Teddy was there to comfort her while she cried.

Oh, the flashback! That was terrible!! Dominique was so distraught, and of course she had to hear Teddy's proposal! So Victoire obviously blames herself for Dom's disappearance. The thing that really bugs me is that Victoire had every right to be happy, but Dominique got offended by her happiness. Humans are silly like that, and you captured that PERFECTLY.

This was a great story! Good luck in the Duel!


Author's Response: Hi there!

Yeah :( I'm glad u got that message about how important her siblings were to her!

Yeah, she does blame herself :) haha, I'm glad u did capture that well. That was the kind of base of this strict; how silly humans can really be!

Thank u! I'm glad u enjoyed it!


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