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Review:Infinityx says:
Hi there! I'm here for the eighth day of the 12 days of reviewing challenge.

This was such an emotion-filled, beautifully written story. I love the closeness between Teddy and Victoire. Its really sad that their happy moment had to be spoiled because Dom was being such a stupid brat.

I love the way you portrayed Teddy. He's just so sweet, sensitive and supporting. It was so nice of him to propose to Vic in a different room. I love the description of how happy Vic had been; that was such a beautiful line! The amount of love he holds for her is so evident and adorable.

I love your characterization of Victoire as well. She just loves her siblings so much. Its a pity Dom couldn't be a bit more mature.

I found a few minute mistakes here and there, which I'm sure you'd find yourself if you read it through again. One thing that really stuck out was your spelling of Victoire. At some places its Victoire and at others its Victorie. That really struck out and interrupted the flow of the story so I thought I'd point it out. :)

Overall, it was brilliant. I absolutely love the way you ended it as well. It was to the point and powerful.

I really enjoyed reading this story. Good job! :)

- Erin

Author's Response: Thank u so so much!! I'm so glad that you thought it was written well!

Hehe, he's definitely my perfect guy! Yeah, thanks so much! I'm really happy with the description in this Aw, thank you! But, of course, don't hate Dom too much! She's just a drama queen, doesn't mean any real harm. :)

Yeah, thank u for pointing that out! You're the first person who has! I'll go back and edit that :)

Thank you so much! I've actually been told that the ending was too abrupt, so this was reassuring :)

Thanks again for the super lovely review! :D

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