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Review:quixotic says:
Hello, here with the review. Once I can wipe my tears away, that is.

Oh my, this was simply heart-wrenching. I really wasn't expecting that. It started off so nicely with the really romantic proposal at the restaurant. Then it took a turn for the worse. Sirius and Marlene couldn't even get married. *breaks down into fresh sobbing*

Okay, forcing myself to look at the story from a technical point of view. Your characterization was very interesting. Sirius is known to be more of a ladies man, knowing exactly what it takes to woo a girl. I was surprised when you declared him very unromantic, forgetting the menu and the ring. I had always imagined him as this smooth and polished guy, so I really liked this new perspective.

Now, I don't know much about Marlene from the books, other than she was part of the Order. I do like the nickname you've given her. She comes across as a really caring and cautious person. I like how you keep describing her as 'she was one of those girls.' Ir's interesting because most writers want to make their protagonist as different and unique as possible. Marlene wasn't afraid to be labelled and I feel that in itself makes her different.

Sirius and Marlene sure were a quirky couple. It looked like they had their special moments. That vanilla bit really broke my heart. You have the knack for making people cry, in the best way possible. It's rare that a writer really invokes the emotions of the reader. It isn't the same thing as getting caught up in a story. It's feeling what the characters feel. I really loved the story and am definitely going to read more of your work from now on! Once I arm myself with a box of tissues, that is. ;)

Author's Response: Aw, in sorry for the tears! But I'm glad u found it heart wrenching :) thank u! :D

Oh! I guess u didn't make that clear! He is a ladies man, but, he doesn't know how to act when he actually likes someone (as cheesy as it sounds!) in glad u liked it instead of it being weird!

Hehe thank u! I personally think that the tom boy character is becoming a cliche. I kind if put my own personality into her. And the 'that kind if girl' is my favourite type of character!

Thank u so much! Oh god. Oh god. That's so sweet! And your reviews obviously have the effect of havering authors year up! :D thank u so much!! That's so sweet! And that was the only sad, horror, dark story I've written, in glad u think I pulled it off well!

Thank u for the amazing review!! :D

-Curie :)

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