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Review:BitterSweetFlames says:
Hiya Curie! :D You have a new story, wooo! :D I actually quite liked this one even while agree with you that Dark/Horror is just so hard.

Just to point out though.. At the start you put down, "Sirius had chosen for their." It seems you forgot a word there. Apart from that there were no other things that stood out grammatically.

So, the proposal was gorgeous! Sirius, arrogant and cocky Sirius, proposing like that? Precious... He was so nervous, and there were just so many things he did wrong and that's what made it so RIGHT.

When she was killed was just so sad... I knew it was going to be a sad ending but I didn't prepare myself.. I'm all, oh my god, why?! You feel sorry for Marlene; you feel sorry for Sirius. I wish it had been an happier ending since I love happy endings, normally but as it is, it's gorgeous. Well done, Curie! :D


Author's Response: Thanks Carla! I guess I had to keep my name up in some way! I enjoy being type cast as a fluff writer!

Ah, okay! I can't bear editing this one! I literally just typed it out and sent it to my beta, poor Grace :( She had a real rough piece to work with...

Thanks so much! Haha, yeah, I wanted to make sure his personality actually could be seen in his actions than just me stating it and I guess it worked :)

Same! I normally want to kill authors who write sad endings... Anyway, thanks Carla! You are WAY too good to me! :D

Thanks again for the super amazing review! You never fail to make my day! :)

-Curie :)

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