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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:

I had to come check out your angsty story!

I've got my Next Gen family tree down so I (mostly) know who people are! Actually, I know who everybody is in this story! :D

In the beginning I was a bit confused, as I was meant to be. I was left wondering why Victoire was so upset and what had happened between Dominique and herself. Great job building up the mystery and anticipation!

I feel very bad for Victoire. Her Christmas Eve and proposal were botched and Dominique is furious with her (and missing). I understand that Dom was going through some tragically emotional issues that the proposal only seemed to mock, but I still feel for Victoire.

The desperate attempt at finding Dominique and the emotions of both Victoire and Teddy were breaking my heart a little. :( Then, you wrapped everything up with a hopeful ending! How festive! :D

I want to mention that you used some beautiful imagery in here.

Well done!


Author's Response: Rumpel!! You are way too sweet! Why are there so many good people in this world?!?! Nah, its not a bad thing... ;)

I'm so glad, yay! Maybe another step closer to reading next gen more freely??

Ah! Yay, the confusing part worked!! Thank god, I had no idea if the build up worked!

Haha, that is good :) It was meant to make the reader go, 'aw, poor girl' :) Yeah, Dom, in my mind, was always a tad (lot) bit dramatic and emotional :)

Yay, that was the angst part and I can't believe i pulled it off! Thanks so much, Rumpel! Haha, yeah, I didn't want to go into details with the make up, because, knowing me, it was probably going to turn fluffy and cheesy, and I didn't want this one to be like that. I think I have enough cheesy and fluffy fics ;)

Thanks so much, imagery is super hard! I'm always scared that the imagery is going to be too try-hard!

Thank u for the amazing review! :D


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