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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello, here from the forums review tag! :)

I absolutely LOVED this story. It was cleverly ridiculous and slyly hilarious (if you know what I mean). First of all, I enjoyed the whole concept of former serial killers being forced to attend therapy, it's very entertaining. The idea of the Hufflepuff method is also great-kill them with kindness, eh? I can see how Voldemort would find that very disturbing.

I laughed out loud when he was absently killing birds, and that he tried to do it on Harry Potter dolls. First, the idea that the wizards made HP dolls did not surprise me one bit, and it fit perfectly that Voldy would use them as his own personal punching bags.

Loved the characterization of Bellatrix: the words and metaphors that you used to portray her put clear and amusing images into my mind. I especially enjoyed this line: "Bellatrix hissed and clawed her way to freedom, but before she managed to jump from the window and make a break for it, the nurses hit her with Petrificus Totalus." Too good.

It also made sense that Narcissa would threaten Lucius with an expensive divorce, so typical of our favourite wealthy Death Eaters. I also felt a little sad for the poisoning old ladies, although I have a feeling they're going to play nice and then go right back to poisoning people.

Another stand out was poor Voldy's bad breath. Now that I think of it, the revival potion must have been pretty disgusting. That was a great touch. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into crafting this masterpiece, and I really enjoyed it! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for such a lovely review! =) Truth to be told, I didn't plan this much, just wrote it straight up. I guess my imagination is bit overactive, and there was some serious sugar rush going on as well. =P

I'm glad you enjoyed a bit different view of such classic baddies. It was super fun to imagine what they would do in such an odd situation. Plus it was interesting to write something where a designated Hufflepuff isn't a total wuss.

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