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Review:ginnyhermionelily says:
ooh suspenseful, what a great place to end the chapter. Although it annoys me to no end that I cant just read on.

I love the part when Mooney tells/screams at Mad eye that he will light him on fire if he tries to clime down the chimney. I really loved it
I laughed so hard. I think it is great that you are connecting Remus and Tonks so much it really opens them up to a relationship if that's were your going with this and if not the scenes with them and Mad-eye are still hilarious.

I love the way you have written Snape you have made him a real Jerk and I really start to loath him while your reading this part.

I thought it was really clever to have Sirius pretend to be a werewolf that opens so many doors to you in the future and Sirius putting Snape in the will was ingenues.

I really hope you write this story wright into harry's first year at Hogwarts it is such an enjoyable story to read.
Please please get the next chapter out really fast I hate cliff hangers but I love your story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so! :D I know - I'm the same way when I read Work In Progress stories. Sorry!
Thank you - I find Remus absolutely hilarious when he's grumpy because he's so different to his usual polite self. It's really fun to write him in those scenes. :P
I'm glad you like the connections. :D To be completely honest, I haven't actually decided where I want to go with Remus and Tonks, only that I enjoy writing them in scenes where they are together. :P I'm sort of waiting for the characters to make the decision for me. :P
Thank you. Snape is actually one of my favourite characters to write because I pity him, and respect him, but he drives me insane at the same time! :P I'm trying to get that across in the way I portray him, so you loathing him means I'm half-way there! :D
Aww! Yes, I'm quite looking forward to seeing where that little lie takes Sirius - I daresay, as you've said, that it'll make for some interesting scenes in the future. :)
Harry going off to Hogwarts is my rough ending point for "Innocent" - though I may stop a little bit earlier, depending on where I am plot-wise. At this point in time, it's looking likely that there will be a sequel too... :D
The next chapter will be up on Sunday, so have a look then. :) Aww!
Thank you so much for the review!

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