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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Eek! This story is just getting more and more intriguing and mysterious and I can't wait to find out more!

I am (almost creepily) fascinated by this relationship between Roxanne and Ben. It is very dark and almost slightly sinister, which I actually love, and I find myself more and more curious by the minute to know what happened between them...and also the whole reason behind Ben leaving.

In some ways, I want to say that I really dislike Ben, but in other ways I want to say that I think he is awesome! He is clearly a very strong willed character, rather like Roxanne in that respect, which is probably why they seem to clash quite a bit. I would also like to learn more about Ben's family life, to see if this has anything to do with why he behaves the way he does...what is his relationship with Draco like?

Dom-Dom is just so adorably sweet and perfect! I just want to protect her and give her a big smooshy hug-and I love the way she tries to look out for Roxanne and how Roxanne tries to look out for her. I always love reading about the relationships of the members of the Weasley family!

Oh god, what's going to happen between Ben and Roxanne next chapter?? I can't wait to find out...or maybe I'm dreading to find out-I'm not quite sure which!

Anyway, great, amazing, perfect chapter!

Author's Response: Hello!

Wow, thank you so much for this lovely review, it has made my day! I was just considering writing more for this story, actually when I saw this review. :D
Oh, the inspiration!
I think the relationship with Roxanne and Benjamin is really interesting and keeps people coming back to this story. It actually changed quite a bit from an earlier draft that I had and is more dark, more sexual on some things and yes, perhaps a tad sinister. Ooh, I like that word. I'm going to use it in the next chapter...
You actually find out hints of what made Ben leave but I haven't given the whole reason just yet. ;)
Bwha, you're not the first! My pal PatronusCharm (Kiana of course) can't STAND Ben. Its so funny to read her little rants, they always make me laugh, even though I can understand why she feels that way.
Anyhoo, he's a hard character to like but I'm glad that you think he's awesome! I patterned his physical appearance off of Bill Weasley, thinking that if he had been raised by the Malfoy's, he'd look alot like Ben. :D
But he is a strong willed guy, which probably is a reason why he and Roxanne don't get along all the time.
You will find out what his relationship with Draco is like in the next chapter? I think? Yes?
I dunno. HAHA.
Dom-Dom! I love her too, she's just pretty sweet all around. But she and Roxanne get along pretty well and I like writing all of the grandchildren's relationships. :D
So many things happen with Ben and Roxie next chapter. I shall re-request! By chapter six if you still want to read this story, you'll want to strangle Ben. And me. Hehehehe.
Thanks so much!
Much love,

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