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Review:Badname says:
What is happening to Peter? I like that you've made his quest for something 'more' a sort of animalistic urge (strange as that sounds, as it's coming in the form of a rat!). Is his downward spiral due to a woman - Luciana?

It's refreshing to see your Lily putting an end to James' incessant pestering, rather than just tolerating it fairly passively (even though his pestering sends her up the wall).

Can't wait 'til your next update :-)

Author's Response: At first I dreaded writing Peter because a lot of stories have him as this stagnant character - you know, blindly following his friends around while the other Marauders take up most of the plot. But then I put myself in his shoes and was like, crap that must have sucked for him. I certainly wouldn't like people glossing over me all the time. My lips are sealed about Luciana though. You'll just have to wait and see ;)

As for Lily and James ... I'm glad you like 'evil' Lily. My first impression of her was that she was a raving be-hotch but I guess I would be too if some guy kept asking me out every second of every day. You'll learn more about her in the upcoming chapters!

Thanks for the review dear!

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