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Review:Jchrissy says:
What! What! This was seriously delicious. I LOVED the descriptions in the beginning. You set the mood so perfectly with the image of this wild thing just taking every eye in the room.

I have a one shot of Draco and Astoria where Astoria acts a lot like Rose. Except Rose is sweet, and Astoria was being cold. I couldn't help but smile at the similarities thought because, well, like father like son ;).

Scorpius's desire to forget it all made me feel so sad for him. He was stuck in this place in life he hated, and he just wanted to drink his firewhiskey and forget about it all. But that wasn't really Rose's style, was it?

When she sashayed herself over to him... gah. I was getting so mad at him for not just going to dance with her because she's on fire and excited and that's all he needed.. not stupid boring Anna.

And even when he does dance with her, he gets back to his quiet little corner as soon as possible.

I loved they way his thoughts came around, though. This wasn't Anna, quiet and subdued. This wasn't the stiff woman who had done nothing but hurt poor Scorpius. And I LOVED that he took the next step on his own, he realized how much he wanted to just be next to her and ah!

You made such a good decision when they went back and stayed up talking. I was so happy that it was that first instead of them just kind of sweeping up into passion... my heart just got all warm and fluffy.

And the end!! I'm going to have to be done now or I may get a bit past 12+.

This was really awesome, m'dear Ashley. your descriptions and energy in it was so...vroom. Like that. I was completely hooked to it the entire read ♥

Author's Response: Jami! I actually really enjoyed writing this, it's one of my favorite stories that I have done so far.

I feel like people have this preconceived notion of what ScoRose should be like and I hope that I kind of broke the mold here a bit, trying to do more of a one night stand thing rather than a long standing romance from Hogwarts.

I really enjoyed writing about Anna, like this girl that you love to hate, who just kind of is a patronizing person who has control issues, which contrasted with Rose's free spirit. I had such fun!!

Thank you so much for reviewing this :)

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