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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi m'dear! I am here for the review swap, and I know it was up in the air whether your new lil baby would give you any time to review, so don't worry at all about trying to and we'll just see you the next month you're able :)

Anyway! This was an incredibly humorous first chapter, which I can just imagine sets the whole scene for the novel. I love the idea of the group (and Lucy, haha) all banning together to plot exactly how they were going to go about finding out if this guy is good enough to be part of the legendary Potter Weasley clan.

All your characters had little hints of their own personality, though you obviously couldn't spent too much time on that considering this was from Hugo's perspective. You're also throwing Molly and Lucy both way out of stereotypical head canons, and I absolutely love that. I really love Molly as The Captain.

This was an adorable, fun first chapter. You had a few typos, so whenever you get the time I think you could give it a read through to iron those out. But it was still very enjoyable :)!

Good luck with your new lil sleep destroyer ;)!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review, I know I haven't been around for a (very long) while and just remembered that I still owe you a review and will get to it right after I'm done with this answer!

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this opening chapter. It's a very new style for me and I'm really happy you enjoyed it. I do imagine the Weasley cousins pretty clearly in my mind and Molly and Lucy are fun to play with. Molly especially :)
The cousins would definitly get into their girls' lives in order to make sure they get with a good lad. Just look at how the Weasley brothers acted toward Ginny. This is the kind of thing they would teach their children, I have no doubt about it!

Thanks again and your review in on it's way!

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