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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi m'dear! I hope you don't mind me selecting this one to review. I feel bad because it's a shorter piece, but your only other one shot is a snape and lily.. and we don't mix :P

Anyway, I'm really thrilled I chose this piece. It was so different, and I couldn't help by be intoxicated by what was going on.

I was really happy that you added the bit about how the woman is in history, because, though the name rang a few bells, I wouldn't have been able to place my finger on why without looking it up.

Your word choice throughout this entire story was so perfect. And with the length of this one shot, that really goes a long way into making this memorable.

After reading your AN I went back through and read it, and I just felt like I wanted to vomit all the way through. And I mean that in a very good way. Just.. what this woman was doing and what she was allowing herself to think.. freeing them from their meat that they don't need, slurping in the water filled with their blood, just. God. It makes it even more gruesome that this woman existed. And the way her thoughts were so, so messed up. The way she enjoyed the sound of the next walking to her with the shackles.. seriously, just gave me chills.

This was really well written and absolutely not over the top!

Thanks for a great swap :)!

Author's Response: Oh hey there! I don't mind at all that you chose this one-shot! I know Lilly and Snape is not for everyone (in fact, I'm surprised people have read it at all haha).

As strange as it may sound, I am happy to read that the text made you want to vomit! I picked the words specifically on the criterea of them being fleshy and gross, and also, yes the subject matter is indeed appaling! To Bathory's defence, she lived in a time when people particularly enjoyed devising cruel, creative and preferably long-wound methods to off eachother. She became famous for, well, being as sadistic as the men and also for going for girls from rich families (which is the only reason she got caught). All in all, very distrubing! I'm thrilled to have been able to give some homage to the general ew of the story. And I hope you enjoyed it nevertheless!

Thank you for the swap, cheers!

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