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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Why can't the two of them just be together? I am dying over here. I just really want them to be together so badly. At least then I won't have to keep thinking is Simon actually nice as he seemed to be before in the earlier chapters or not. Last time I saw him, he wanted to get rid of Elena (but I don't think he meant it) but it's like he wants to keep Elena and I am just confused. Can you please tell Simon to stop being so confusing? Please.

I'm really loving this fast pace you have here, I've been noticed it starting from when Simon and Elena attacked though I didn't think much of it then. This just great. It goes so well with the mystery in the story :). Also, I know I haven't mentioned this for a while now but I do think your dialogues are great. They are really well constructed and just very realistic.

Argh. I really need to read the next chapter now! Hahahah. You got me hooked!


50th review out of 100

Author's Response: Hi again :)

Ah pacing, my constant worry. But actually there is a point later in this story where there is one long scene that extends over several (3) chapters, because there is so much action there is no time for a break. But so as not to scare people off, there are also a few slower/more introspective scenes. Oh and thank you! :D

Okay, so going back to the first paragraph of this review :P I get it, at this point "confusing" is pretty much Simon's middle name. Or maybe it's "mixed signals" ;) Hopefully it is not too exhausting to put up with all the emotional swings/shifts that are going on :P But, I will say this: read two more chapters and you will be rewarded.

Okay, just a disclaimer, there will also be more questions two chapters later. But really, at this point, you shouldn't be surprised about the amount of questions that crop up in this story. But I swear I don't do it just to make people crazy!

Anyways--thank you for all these lovely reviews! It makes me so happy to hear that you're enjoying reading this. (And clearly I'm having too much fun responding to your reviews as well).


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