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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling, I went to your profile to leave you a comment telling you thank you so much for the before they fall nomination!and then I saw your status about you having new chapter! I was very excited!

Anyway! I found something rather sweet about Scorpius wanting to pry into Rose's personal life and figure out what the tension between her and her family is about. I also really like that you made Scorpius's fear of Ron and Harry evident. I can absolutely understand not wanting to get on their bad side, and staying in the same house as Ron's daughter would definitely do that. Haha!

Okay I have to say that my jaw literally dropped when Harry pointed out that his Phoenix feather wand isn't the only one that's loyal to him. You're such a sneaky girl! The idea of someone figuring out a duplicate the elder wand is absolutely terrifying. And it was clearly serious enough to get Ron to shut his mouth up. Poor guy.

Now you gave me all these warm feels at the end of this chapter. Actually I forgot to mention how many warm feels you gave me with mentioning Sirius! I can just hug you for that!

The tension between Rose and Scorpius is really great because it's not just an underlying attraction or Hogwarts friendship/ rivalry type of tension. It's its own kind of chemistry that I'm really loving so far. Your writing style is so flawless and easy to read, slipping into your chapters really is a joy. Loved this one, my dear! Can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Hello!

You're very welcome for the nomination. It did say to nominate the best written and I couldn't think of any other Jily story that's better! You absolutely deserve it.

I'm so happy you liked this, since it was the first introduction into what life will be like at Grimmauld for them. And as for Sirius, I always thought it would be great if they hung his portrait over Walburga's. He deserves it more.

Ah, the Elder Wand. That's going to escalate quickly, if I do say so myself and since you've sent me to edit this last week I wrote 3 more chapters. I guess I have you to thank for that! :)
Thank you so much for the lovely review!

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