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Review:Jchrissy says:
I could seriously kiss you right now I was so happy when Lucius left and Dorcas was still safe.

Things are getting closer and closer to a boiling point, which would be good except the fact that I know I only have a few chapters left... and this can only end one way :(.

I love the details about the shadows communicating with Severus. It feels like, even though we're not entirely sure how it's all happening, that the other members of the guild want to help him.

I don't remember if the detail about the Dark Mark tingling if somebody is looking for him is Canon or not but regardless it's super awesome. Especially considering it alerted him that creepy Avery is a few minutes away and gave the guild time to try and help him duplicate the book.

That little bit for they dwell on their parents was such a sad reminder of how much everyone really is losing, and I hate how often you have to go and make me feel sorry for Severus. Telling Dorcas that the only reason he joined the death eaters in the first place was because they threatened to kill his parents in front of him made my heart sad.

Why did you have to go and make me fall in love with Dorcas and even get to the point where I actually like Severus? I know you're just going to rip them away from me ;(.

Author's Response: Oh good. I made Jami happy for once!

I love those shadows too. I was tempted to go out on a tangent and make those shadows into a full fledged story line. Could be fun one day. And I figured that it just made sense that if you had a mark on you and other people were using it to track you that you'd feel something, especially if it was stuck to your arm or something. I dunno if it's canon either, but it follows a certain logic.

Hey, it's Severus. For most people, I have to give them constant reminders of how hard it was to be him. Apparently all it's doing for you is making you need more chocolate. *hands over another bar* I left out the almonds this time, so, err... drink some milk or something...

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