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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh God I wish I'd been writing a running review! I'm at the end of the chapter and I had so many things to say during it and so many things I wanted to comment on but now I can't think of anything except wanting to cry :(. It isn't fair. A brand new family with their baby so close to being *theirs* and gah. You're crushing my heart.

Avery is just such a blood thirsty stupid idiot. His bragging is the only thing that saved Dorcas, so I kind of want to pat him on the back for that. But then I want to do something entirely different so we can finally just be rid of him for good.

And Severus :(. Why are you making me like him?! I don't want to! I don't need to! But no, here I am feeling so sorry for him and just wanting to scoop him and Dorcas up and hug them both. But Severus doesn't seem to be the type to enjoy being hugged by random strangers.. soo..

And! I had a guess before about Avery being Rookwood! Go Jami! Still, not sure how sorry I feel for the real rookwood. Maybe because I'm too bad feeling sorry for Dorcas :(.

This chapter was so heart breaking and a very, very sharp reminder of how we now this has to end ;(. But your writing is so beautiful that I feel like this story is just telling itself, playing like a little movie in my head.

Author's Response:
Aww, Jami! You're so into this it makes ME want to cry a little.

Avery is everything you say he is, and more. Or maybe not much more, but still. Unfortunately, canon lets him live, if you can believe that.

I don't want to make you like Severus at all, I don't know where you ever got that idea. *whistles innocently* He's just some guy who's in a bad spot and happens to have stumbled on some girl who thinks he deserves more than the awful existence that he's been given. I didn't mean it to be you. Sorry!

The whole Avery/Rookwood thing was a last minute muse attack that almost derailed my plot, but I made it work the best I could. I guess I really liked the idea of tying Dorcas' family to the "other side". She's such a mess!

Thanks so much for your review and all your lovely compliments about my writing. You give me those little warm, fuzzies all over. :)

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