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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi, Aderyn!

It's Izzy here, if you still remember me. I'm supposed to review this story as part of winning the 'No Dialogue' challenge I issued months ago. I'm really sorry for the long delay. I promise I'll do them as soon as I can!

It's been really long since I last reviewed this story, but I'm still a very big fan of the Simon/Elena ship. I think the two of them would work out really well, if only Simon would stop being so mysterious. I always feel like he's hiding something very personal away from Elena and it's irritating me, but it's also pushing me forward to read more about the story and read more about Simon.

Elena slashing through those couches and other upholstery really got me going. I thought you wrote that part very well, for the quickest of moments I felt like I was her! But then I had to snap back to reality. :(

Out of all the things that I love most about your story, I really love how it never loses its touch of mystery. In fact, as the story moves on, the mystery just builds up and that's how every mystery story should be! ♥ Amazing chapter, it was a great read! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Happy Holidays,
Izzy xx

Author's Response: Hi!

It's not a problem. I've been a bit late responding to this review as well.

Everyone likes acting mysterious in this story, to some extent. Though obviously, it's not so great for the characters, it's fun to write. So saying that Simon's hiding something isn't at all far fetched ;)

Wow, thank you! I guess I was a bit worried that scene would come off as too fast paced, but I'm glad to hear that it worked for you!

Aww, this is such a sweet review. Thank you so much! All the things you said make me all happy and then make me feel guilty that I didn't reply to it sooner. xD

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