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Review:slayground says:
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This...this is just brilliant XD

Peony is literally the epitome of Mary Sue, and I simultaneously want to punch her and be her best friend. The fact that you can write a character like this in a story and still make it enjoyable to read is proof of what a wonderful author you are - with characters who are Mary Sue's you usually don't want to continue the story at all, but with this I actually really want to keep reading!

So yeah, it's hilarious and adorable and I'm definitely going to continue on! Wonderful work, I love it :D

Author's Response:

I tried to pick the Sueish qualities that are inherent in all of us... you know, the parts of us that think, "Oh, how wonderful my life would be if everyone around me did this or that but if I said that out loud it would sound stupid so I'm just going to keep my happy thoughts to myself"... except Peony doesn't because she's awesome like that.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. As much as I loathe Mary Sue stories, I actually had a lot of fun putting this thing together. I'm so happy you're enjoying it!

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